我有太多书 ;_; 今天上班以前我买了一本书。因为我的书架上没有空间，我不应该买了这本书。我最近在网上买了新的书架，可是现在还没空间。我在卧室里地板和桌子上堆放了很多书。我也把书放在床上。;_; 不过我下个星期会收到新书架，所以我快有比较多储藏书的空间。

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我有太多书 ;_;

今天上班以前我买了一本书。因为可是我的书架上没有空间了，所以我不应该买了这本书。我最近在网上买了新的书架，可是现在还没空间放书。我在卧室里地板和桌子上堆放了很多书。我也把书放在床上。;_; 不过我下个星期会收到新书架，所以我就快要有比较更多储藏书的空间了。

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Probably a more authentic way to express your idea:

今天上班之前我买了一本书。可是我的书架上没有空间了，所以我其实不该买这本书的。虽然我最近在网上买了新的书架，可是在它送到之前，我都没有空间放书。所以我在卧室地板、桌子和床上都堆了很多书，;_; 不过新书架下个星期就到了，这样我马上就有更多位置可以放书了。

You might find these advices helpful:

Use more conjunction words to make the sentences more coherent;
Put sentences (or clauses) that are of a similar sense together ( as in "I stack many books on the floor, the desk and the bed in my bedroom";
The usage of "了" can be quite confusing, but it is a vital part in understanding the language well. I hope you'll find enough resources on this;
emotes like ;_; are understandable among young people, but not all of them. To express a sad emotion we may use 555, for it is homophonous with "呜呜呜（wūwūwū）", the onomatopoeia we use to imitate a crying sound. For "lol" we might use "hhhhhhh" or "23333". I think it might be interesting to tell you this :D

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