What do you do for work?
I will start a new job, performance marketer from tomorrow. I am very excited and nervous.
I choose the job becuase it is trendy job. The world changed so fast. This job was not exist before, but many companys need it nowadays. I can get opportunity easily with this work.
I also can work anywhere with a laptop. 3 years ago, I was a event planner. I always had to work at the office or event venue. This company that I will work has a rule working just twice in a week at the office. That is really big advantage for me.
I hope I work very well in the new field.
* please correct it to natural spoken English and keep my voice.
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What do you do for work?
I will start a new job, performance marketer from tomorrow. as a performance marketer tomorrow. I am very excited and nervous.
I choose the chose this job becuase because it is a trendy job. The world has changed so fast. This job was did not exist before, but many companys companies need it nowadays. I can get opportunity opportunities easily with this work. job
I also can work anywhere with a laptop. 3 years ago, I was a an event planner. I always had to work at the office or at an event venue. This company that I will work for has a rule of working just only twice in a week at the office. That is a really big advantage for me.
I hope I work very well in the new field.
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What do you do for work?
I will be starting a new job tomorrow as a performance marketer. start a new job, performance marketer from tomorrow. I am very excited and nervous.
I chose choose the job because becuase it is trendy job. The world has changed so fast. This job did was not exist before, but many companies companys need it nowadays. I can get more opportunities opportunity easily with this job work.
I also can work anywhere with a laptop. 3 years ago, I was an a event planner. I always had to work at the office or at an event venue. This company that I will work with has a rule about only working just twice in a week at the office. This That is a really big advantage for me.
I hope I work very well in this the new field.
* please correct it to natural spoken English and keep my voice.
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Hi, this is my first time writing a correction. Sorry if I formatted wrong. I didn't realize someone wrote one down below already but I will submit mine anyway. Congratulations on your new job! :) Sounds wonderful!
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new jobs have a good point that your chief cant Interference in your details job. because they don't know about your job and they just want final result.
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