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Practice making sentences 1. I love Thesaurus, which helps me find the exact synonyms. 2. A painting depicted two deer standing in the snow and a lighted house in the distance. 3. The artist depicted her sitting on the chair. 4. The novel depicts a love story between two teenagers during the French revolution. What surprised me is that the villain was the hero’s father, which was unfolded at the end of the novel. In fact, the villain is my favorite character because his voice was so charming, which was read by Tom Hiddleston. 5. The advertisement depicts the meat from every part of the cow that can be made into delicious food. 6. In ancient, the emperor was depicted as a dragon, which is a sacred animal that is different from the dragon of the western.

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1 - I love the thesaurus, which helps me find the exact synonyms for words.
(alternatively) 1 - I love Thesaurus.com, which helps me find the exact synonyms for words.
2. A painting depicted two deer standing in the snow and a lighted house in the distance.
3. The artist depicted her sitting on the chair.
4. The novel depicts a love story between two teenagers during the French Revolution. What surprised me was that the villain was the hero’s father, which unfolded at the end of the novel. In fact, the villain is my favourite character because his voice was so charming. His part in the movie was read by Tom Hiddleston.
(alternatively) 4 - The novel depicts a love story between two teenagers during the French Revolution. What surprised me was that the villain was the hero's father, which was revealed at the end of the novel. His part in the movie was read by Tom Hiddleston.
5. The advertisement depicts the meat from every part of the cow that can be made into delicious food.
6 - In ancient China, the emperor was depicted as a dragon, which was believed to be a sacred animal. This belief differed from the Western view of dragons.

For 4, I added the part 'in the movie' because the start of your writing refers to a book, so clarification needs to be made between the two.
For 1, if you are referring to a specific thesaurus, you would use that name with a capital, like I did in the second one. Otherwise, you refer to it as an ordinary item ('the thesaurus').

Hope this helped :)

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