Please hlpe me to check this CV, thank you!
Hi, guys, I want to have a job interview in a company, can you help me check some of the sentences in my CV?
1.Senior quality management person, 10 years of experience in the beverage industry, extensive experience in factory quality management.
2.Be familiar with EXCEL function and good knowledge of EXCEL formula
3.Detected the physical, chemical and microbiological items of semi-finished products or finished products, including pH value, conductivity, ozone concentration, turbidity, residual chlorine and the preparation and calibration of various solutions;
4.The arrival inspection of PET preforms, caps, shrink films, cartons, etc.
5.The shipment inspection of finished products, including the appearance inspection, physical, chemical inspection and micro-inspection (chromaticity, turbidity, capacity, Pseudomonas aeruginosa, coliforms, etc.);
6.Be responsible for the whole process of production, such as the parameters of the CCP, taking corrective measures in time when the parameters deviate, and dealing with the deviation of the products to be inspected;
7.Be responsible for the review and finishing of daily job reports, workshop quality issues and feedback work;
The establishment and promotion of the quality system:
Began to set up the factory FSSC/ISO22000/HACCP system in 2013, completed the certification in the same year and passed the annual review after the successful adoption;
Led the factory HACCP team work, including program file update, system internal audit, retrospective drill, recall Rehearsal, system validation and verification, management review, etc.;
Be responsible for quality system maintenance, ensuring compliance and customers.
●Be responsible for the development of departmental annual plan, undertake development plans of superiors and groups, formulate action plans, and decompose them into monthly indicators. Completed QC monthly/quarterly/annual report, contents: tracking of the previous meeting, abnormality of this period, KPI&DPI achievement status and difference analysis, project management, customer complaint report, expense management summary and difference analysis, current period summary, next work plan, etc.
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Please hlpe me to check this CV, thank you!
Hi, guys, I want to have a job interview in a company, can you help me check some of the sentences in my CV?
1.Senior quality management person manager, 10 years of experience in the beverage industry, extensive experience in factory quality management.
2.Be familiar with Good EXCEL skills- good working knowledge of EXCEL functions and good knowledge of EXCEL formulas
3.Detected Experience in detecting the physical, chemical and microbiological items of semi-finished products or finished products, including pH value, conductivity, ozone concentration, turbidity, residual chlorine and the preparation and calibration of various solutions;
4.Responsible for The arrival inspection of PET preforms, caps, shrink films, cartons, etc.
5Responsible for.The shipment inspection of finished products, including the appearance inspection, physical, chemical inspection and micro-inspection (chromaticity, turbidity, capacity, Pseudomonas aeruginosa, coliforms, etc.);
6.Be responsible for the whole process of production, such as the parameters of the CCP, taking corrective measures in time when the parameters deviate, and dealing with the deviation of the products to be inspected;
7.Be responsible for the review and finishing of daily job reports, workshop quality issues and feedback work;
The establishment and promotion of the quality system:
Responsible for Leading the factory HACCP team work, including program file update, system internal audit, retrospective drill, recall Rehearsal, system validation and verification, management review, etc.;
●Be responsible for the development of departmental annual plan, undertake development plans of superiors and groups, formulate action plans, and decompose them into monthly indicators. Completion of QC monthly/quarterly/annual report, contents: tracking of the previous meeting, abnormality of this period, KPI&DPI achievement status and difference analysis, project management, customer complaint report, expense management summary and difference analysis, current period summary, next work plan, etc.
In a CV a formal style is usual so typically avoid use of personal pronouns. Better use the strucutre - Responsible for + gerund/noun.
Maybe before point 4 use the title: responsilbe for: and then list under that the different repsonsilbilities.
I hope the correction isn't too late for the interview.
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