Courage is The Key
Sometimes, you will be afraid of making mistakes in your work, you think it can be figured out and make you can't live up to your colleagues' expectations. But more fear you have, you will have more difficult to take you ability to a higher level. You need to know that things usually will not going as smooth as you thought it would be. Being relaxed and take courage.Only if you keep learning and challenge yourself ,you will achieve your goals finally.
(Please point out the word i use not properly and the grammar mistakes ,Thx a lot)
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Courage is The Key
Sometimes, you will be afraid of making mistakes in your work, you think it can be figured out and and hope to live up to your colleagues' expectations. But the more fear you have, you will have the more difficult it is to take you ability to a higher level. You need to know that things often will not go as smoothly as you thought they would . Be relaxed and pluck up courage.Only if you keep learning and challenge yourself, will you finally achieve your goals.
(Please point out the words I did not use properly and the grammar mistakes,Thanks a lot.
Don't use texting words or social media contractions etc unless writing on social media or texting close friends. I tried as best as possible not to totally change everything.
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Courage is The Key
Oftentimes, we are afraid of making mistakes, at school, at work, or wherever, which causes us to feel that we cannot live up to the expectations of either our friends or our colleagues. However, the more fear that we cause ourselves, the more difficulty we will have not only in performing, but also in taking our abilities to a higher level. We need to accept the fact that things will often not go as smoothly in life as we thought they would. The answer is to stay relaxed and to develop confidence in our abilities, as that will give us the courage to continue. It is only by constantly learning, challenging, and adapting ourselves, that we will finally overcome our problems and achieve our goals.*
(Please point out the words I did not use properly, and any grammar mistakes. Thanks a lot!)
Hi, Gavin. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.
*You wrote this in the Second Person POV, but I feel it works better in a First Person one--as if you are simply talking to me. Thus, my change. Overall, I would not say that you made grammar mistakes, but more that you are not simply not familiar enough with the language (naturally so, as an ESOL student...). In that respect, I suggest that you find good English language materials (newspapers, magazines, etc.) and read more, not only to improve your vocabulary, but also start to see how sentences are properly constructed. Best of luck!
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