Record of my Saturday
It's rain last night so that the weather is colder today and people is feel comfortable.I feel that i only do four things today.The first thing is to clean my room.The second is to talk with my customer.The third is to make delicious food for myself.The last one is to finish reading one book.There is something wrong with my eyes for about half month.I need to finish to read this book last month ,but for the reason of my eye ,i only finish it today.It would be thankful if you help to revise my composition,thank you very much.
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Record of my Saturday,
Last night was rainy. Which made the weather colder today and people feel more comfortable.I feel that i only did four things today: the first thing was to clean my room; the second was to talk with my customer; the third was to make delicious food for myself and the last one was to finish reading a book.There has been something wrong with my eyes for about half a month.I needed to finish this book last month ,but because of my eyes ,i was only able to finish it today.It would be thankful if you could help me by revising this composition,thank you very much.
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