Describing datas for IELTS exam (Task 1)
Thank you for any comment and suggestion of word/expression. (Please if you have took IELTS exam or you have experience in this test, let me know your strategies or suggestions)
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The graph illustrate the age groups who were more likely to buy tickets for different types of enternteinment during some months of 2006 in three nations and what kind of device they used for getting the tickets. Overall, Australia was the country which have more consumers of tickets and desktop computer was the most common device used for buying them.
First, it is clear that Australia was the main country which bought more tickets for enterntainment in both age groups. In the 25-44 years group there was around 55% of people making up opposed to Malasy which had only around 33% of consumers in this category. Then, in the group of 65 years and more, the majority of consumers of this comparasion was found in Australia with 40%. On the other hand, Malasya was again the country with the lowest percentage of clients with around 35% only.
In the case of UK, they had a very similar amount of people buying tickets as Australia: in the first category (25-44) 50% and 40% in the group of elderly people.
Finally, it is evident that Desktop Computer was the greater device to acquired tickets in the three nations. The main country which opted to use it was Malasya (62%) opposed to Australia (55%). The second more popular advice used was laptop and the latest was mobile phones.
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Describing Data for the IELTS Exam (Task 1)
Thank you for any comments or suggestions for words/expressions. (Please, if you have taken the IELTS exam or you have experience with this test, let me know your strategies or suggestions)
Thank you in advance :)
The graph illustrates the age groups which were more likely to buy tickets for different types of entertainment during several months of 2006 in three nations and what kind of devices were used for purchasing/buying the tickets. Overall, Australia was the country which had the most consumers of tickets, and a desktop computer was the most commonly used device for buying them.
First, it is clear that Australia was the main country which bought more tickets for enterntainment in both age groups. In the 25-44 years old age group around 55% of people made purchases, as opposed to Malaysia which had only around 33% of consumers in this category. In the age group of 65 years and older, the majority of consumers in this comparison were found in Australia with 40%. On the other hand, Malaysia was again the country with the lowest percentage of consumers/customers with around 35%.
In the case of the UK, a similar amount of people bought tickets as in Australia: in the first category (25-44 yrs.) 50%, and 40% in the group of elderly people.
Finally, it is evident that a desktop computer was the most common device used to acquire tickets in the three nations. The leading country which opted to use them was Malasya (62%) as opposed to Australia (55%). The second most popular device used was a laptop computer and the least used was a mobile phone.
Hi Carmen, I hope this helps or gives you some ideas. I hope you do well on the exam.
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