Please I need some helpe with an essay for my next exam.
Protecting the environment = enhancing your life.
Nowadays more and more people are aware, as well as concerned, about the consecuences of climate change in our lifes. Not to mention the irreversibility of it’s effects on the earth. That is why they clamour for inmediate actions. And these are some point which we can start with.
One of the first things we should seriously consider is the 3 Rs; reduce, reuse, recycle. The two first are the ones we can do by ourselves. Stop buying tons of products you don´t really need. Be creative and reuse what you already have. We tend to adquire the same things over and over again. These are easy targets. However, recycling is totally useless without Goverments support as no matter how much you recycle if your council don’t finish the process, sometimes because of the cost.
Another isue which is worth to fight is the effects of carbon dioxide on air pollution. It is said to be caused by cars . Commuting by byke could be a win-win point as we could tackle the former point at the same time that we excercise.
Summarising, one single person can not change the whole problem. But the whole problem can be fixed by 7 billion of us. The first step is to take conciousness of the hazard that pollution is.
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Please I need some help with an essay for my next exam.
Protecting the environment = enhancing your life.
Nowadays more and more people are aware, as well as concerned, about the consequences of climate change in our lifes (no es incorrecta esta frase pero no la veo necesaria). Not to mention the irreversibility of its (aunque sea posesiva "its" nunca lleva apostrofo) effects on the earth. That is why they clamour for require/demand immediate action. And these are some points which we can start with.
One of the first things we should seriously consider is the 3 Rs: reduce, reuse, recycle. The two first two are the ones we can do by ourselves. Stop buying tons of products you don´t really need. Be creative and reuse what you already have. We tend to acquire the same things over and over again. These are easy targets. However, recycling is totally useless without governments' support as no it doesn't matter how much you recycle if your council doesn't finish the process, sometimes because of the cost.
Another issue which is worth to fighting (cuando dices "worth" el verbo despues es gerundio - it's worth walking more; it's not worth risking money; it's worth putting in effort) is the effects of carbon dioxide on air pollution. It is said to be caused, in part, by cars. Commuting by bike could be a win-win point as we could tackle the former point pollution (mas claro asi) at the same time that we excercise.
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Please I need some help with an essay for my next exam.
Protecting the environment is enhancing your life.
Nowadays more and more people are aware, as well as concerned, about the consequences of climate change in their lives. Not to mention, the irreversibility of its effects on the earth. That is why they are clamouring for immediate actions. Here are some points we can start with.
One of the first things we should seriously consider is the 3 Rs; reduce, reuse, recycle. The two first r's are the ones we can do by ourselves. Stop buying tons of products you don´t really need. Be creative and reuse what you already have. We tend to acquire the same things over and over again. These are easy targets. However, recycling is totally useless without goverment support as no matter how much you recycle, if your council doesn’t finish the process, sometimes because of the cost, (You trail off here. You need to finish your sentence.)
Another issue which is worth mentioning is the effects of carbon dioxide. It is said to be caused by cars . Commuting by bike could be a win-win solution because we could tackle the former point while exercising.
In conclusion, one single person can not change the whole problem. But the whole problem can be fixed by 7 billion of us. The first step is to be conscious of the hazard that pollution is.
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