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The letter to a friends of mine on 27 July (in English) Could you correct me? I would love you to teach me more natural expression for spoken language. Thank you so much! =) Sorry for the bad mood yesterday. For me, you went to the store with me, found a fan that looked good and cheap, and told me that you should buy it, but I did not. Even though you tried to persuade, it sounded compelling to me and felt unpleasant. But looking back, I can understand that was for my benefit. Even though you took me there… I’m sorry. I will buy one next time. Thank you for looking for one together.

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A letter to a friends of mine on the 27th of July (in English)

Could you correct this letter for me? I would love you to teach me more natural expressions for the spoken language.
これ、もういいです：I would love to learn more natural expressions for the spoken language.
Thank you so much! =)

Sorry for the bad mood yesterday.
Sorry for being in a bad mood yesterday.
For me, you went to the store with me, found a fan that looked good and cheap, and told me that you should buy it, but I did not.
After you went to the trouble of going to the store with me, helped me find a fan that looked good and affordable, and told me that I should buy it; I didn't.
Even though you tried to persuade, it sounded compelling to me and felt unpleasant.
Even though you tried to persuade me gently, it sounded a little aggressive, so I felt a little cornered.
But looking back, I can understand that was for my benefit.
But looking back, I can see how you were only trying to help me.
Even though you took me there… I’m sorry.
I realize it was nice of you to take me there...I'm sorry if I wasted your time.
I will buy one next time.
I'll definitely buy a fan next time.
Thank you for looking for one together.
Thank you for helping me look and for being a good friend.
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A The letter to a friend friends of mine on 27 July (in English)

Could you correct the letter for me? I would love you to teach me more natural expressions for spoken language.
Thank you so much! =)


Sorry for being in such a the bad mood yesterday. For me, You went to the store with me and found an inexpensive fan that also looked good for me and cheap. and You told me to that you should buy it, but I didn't not. Even though you tried to persuade me kindly, it sounded forceful compelling to me, which made me feel uncomfortable and felt unpleasant. But looking back, I can understand that you were just trying to help me was for my benefit. You took the time to take me to the store and even found a fan for me Even though you took me there… I’m sorry. I will definitely buy the fan one next time. Thank you for helping me and for being a good friend looking for one together.
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everyone has bad mood sometimes.

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