Abandoned places
There are many historical sites in every corner of the world, some of them are abandoned. Should the government spent lots of money to renovated them. In my opinion, we should consider on their veritable value, maybe there were some memorable events behind the buildings, which could remind people don’t repeat the mistakes in the past. Or maybe the structure of the buildings are magnificent, which arouse us to respect our ancestor’s intelligent. Or maybe they are just abandoned and dormant, which are unvalued. So, it’s depend on the value of these buildings for government to consider to renovated them or not.
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Abandoned places
There are many historical sites in every corner of the world, some of them are abandoned. Should the government spent lots of money to renovated them. In my opinion, we should consider on their veritable value, maybe there were some memorable events behind the buildings, which could remind people don’t repeat the mistakes in the past. Or maybe the structure of the buildings are magnificent, which arouse us to respect our ancestor’s intelligent. Or maybe they are just abandoned and dormant, which are unvalued. So, it’s depend on the value of these buildings for government to consider to renovated them or not.
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There are many historical sites in every corner of the world and some of them are abandoned. Should the government spend lots of money to renovate them? In my opinion, we should consider their value. Maybe there were some memorable events surrounding the buildings which could remind people of their past mistakes and how not to repeat them. Or maybe the structure and facade of the buildings are magnificent, which inspire us to admire our ancestors' intellect. Or maybe they are just abandoned, with no significant value to them. Therefore, the government should consider the value of these buildings in its decision to renovate them or not.
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