Dear English experts please help me to check the story about myself
I warmly welcome you, my dear guest! )) My name is Oksana. I am aware of myself as an artist.
The love to depict something on the plane, apparently, is my inherent quality and periodically manifests itself in different places. Examples of places — the entrance of my house, the wall on the Playground in the yard, wall Newspapers, paintings... I draw and get pleasure from it )) If you are interested, you can look at the bottom of the photo. If you continue to read about my persona, then I can still report that I am an extrovert, sometimes rhyming words (mostly congratulatory content), and knowledgeable people say that I am phlegmatic )).
Nice of you to stop by my shop. If when viewing my pictures any will look at You in reply, I will be very glad to cooperation.
Thank you for your attention. All success in life, have a nice day (night...) and a great mood!
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Dear English experts please help me to (infinitive not needed after help. sometimes get follows help) check this story about myself
I warmly welcome you, my dear guest! )) My name is Oksana. I consider (лучше) myself as an artist.
The desire to depict something on canvass(most common medium for painting. If you want to emphasize a more broad array of what you draw on, maybe instead of plane you could say media plural of medium, but even I am hesitating to recommend you this. It might be best to just say canvass, even if you don't have a canvass in mind. Everyone will understand what you mean), apparently, is my inherent quality and periodically manifests itself in different places. Examples of places are the entrance of my house, the wall on the playground in the yard, wall newspapers, paintings... I draw and get pleasure from it )) If you are interested, you can look at the bottom of my profile photo. If you continue to read about my persona, then I can still report that I am an extrovert, who sometimes rhymes words (mostly congratulatory content-this is an example of alliteration - con con. In alliteration you try to repeat phonemes Например-Docter Dowell does his duties with distinction. Rhyming refers to the ends of words exclusively. - напрмиер - When the stars threw down their spears / and water'd heaven with their tears), and knowledgeable people say that I am phlegmatic (perfectly fine, but keep in mind that phlegmatic is more of a literary word. It is not often used in conversational speech, at least in America. People generally prefer to use stoic, and I think you might encounter many English speakers who don't even know the word phlegmatic).
Nice of you to stop by my shop. If, when viewing my pictures any will look at You in reply(непонял выделанную фразу) , I will be very glad to cooperate.
Thank you for your attention. All the best!, have a nice day (night...) and a great mood be positive (maybe. I'm not sure actually. We generally don't wish people a good mood literally People might say - stay/be positive; keep your head up; have a good day/more colloquially have a good one; have a good time)!
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