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Peaches Are In Full Season Summer is a tasty season because it's the best time of fruits. Although modern technologies have made it very easy to get almost any fruit you want any time, there're still exceptions which are called seasonal fruits. They are normally produced in a sole area and beat mediocre competitors from others areas. That's why normally smart merchants registered the places name as brand name for these products. Yangshan Peach from Yangshan Town is one of them. It's famous for being juicy, sweat and "melt in your mouth". In my eyes, only Yangshan Peach deserves the name of peach. It's the right season of Yangshan peach. My mum must be very happy to see the peaches and my face tomorrow. It's the right time to be good to our parents.

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Peaches Are in Full Season

I like to think of summer as being the “fruity” season because it is when more of them are available. Although modern technology has made it easier to get almost any type of fruit that you want at any time, there are still exceptions known as seasonal fruits. Such fruits normally come from a sole area and beat out their mediocre competitors that come from elsewhere. That is why smart merchants have registered the place name as part of the brand name for these products, for example, Yangshan Peaches, which come from the small town of Yangshan.

While these peaches are quite famous for being juicy, sweet and having a ‘melt in your mouth’ quality, in my eyes, they are so tasty that only the ones from there are truly deserving of the name “peach.” It is currently the high season for Yangshan peaches, and I know that come tomorrow, my mum will be very happy to see not only my face, but also her peaches, which I will stop and buy for her. In that respect, regardless of what season it actually is, it is always the right season to be good to our parents.*

Hi, Kailin! As usual, "Whatever changes…."  I hope you enjoy the time with your mum! J.

 *Unless you are writing dialogue or actually speaking, I would say to stay away from using “there’re."  It is not Standard English, and while I can understand your use of it from other contractions (there is = there’s, they will = they’ll), please think of it as a valuable treasure—to be deeply buried and kept secret! (*-^) I will not even talk about “is’s”… Nor “sweat.” You are killing me, K., just killing me…

P.S. I thought you might be interested in the below links. With the story in the WSJ dating back to 2009, I would surmise that they are arguably "world-famous" by now. If only you had written about this sooner, perhaps I could have tried one while I was in Hong Kong! I am glad that I am missing the protests though...

http://www.chinadaily.com.cn/m/jiangsu/wuxi/2019-07/19/content_37493664.htm

https://www.wsj.com/articles/SB10001424052970203946904574300192082040918


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Peaches Are In Full Season

Summer is a tasty season because it's the best time for fruit of fruits. Although modern technology has have made it very easy to get almost any fruit you want at any time, there're still exceptions which are called seasonal fruits. They are normally produced in one a sole area and beat mediocre competitors from others areas. That's why, normally smart merchants registered the place's name as a brand name for these products.

Yangshan peaches from the town of Yangshan Town is an example one of them. It's The peaches famous for being juicy, sweat and "melt in your mouth". In my eyes, only Yangshan peaches deserves the name of peach.

It's the right season for of Yangshan peaches. My mum must be very happy to see the peaches and my face tomorrow. It's the right time to be good to our parents.

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