corrections please! :)
Would be great, if someone could tell the mistakes here. :)
This is my first personal piece of music that has worked as a training project while studying Logic Pro X.
This simple composition has been created by myself. I have also played and recorded all the live instruments in this song. I have no earlier experience in music production. Especiallly my mixing and mastering outcomes are still under development. However, I am fairly satisfied with the result. This project has been a great experience and it has taught me a lot. On top of this, it has been fun! More songs are coming soon, hope you enjoy!
The song is produced with Logic Pro X. Sounds and effects are from Logic’s own library. The video has been made with iMovie. All the clips in the video are downloaded from pixabay.com and are under the licensing of pixabay as well.
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corrections please! :)
Would be great, if someone could tell me about the mistakes here. :)
This is my first personal piece of music [do you mean your first composition? or is this the first time you have used one of your compositions with Logic Pro X?] that has workedbeen used as a training project while studying Logic Pro X.
This simple composition has been created by myself me. I have also played and recorded all the live instruments in this song. I have no earlier previous experience in music production. My mixing and mastering outcomes [skills?] are especially still under development. However, I am fairly satisfied with the result. This project has been a great experience and it has taught me a lot. On top of this, it has been fun! More songs are will be coming soon, [I] hope you enjoy!
The song is was produced with Logic Pro X. Sounds and effects are from Logic’s own library. The video has been was made with iMovie. All the clips in the video are were downloaded from pixabay.com and are under the licensing of pixabay as well.
[Well done. Mostly minor errors. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.]
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corrections please! :)
Would be great, if someone could tell the mistakes here. :)
This is my first personal piece of music that has worked as a training project while studying Logic Pro X.
This simple composition has been created by myself. I have also played and recorded all the live instruments in this song. I have no earlier experience in music production. Especiallly my mixing and mastering outcomes are still under development. However, I am fairly satisfied with the result. This project has been a great experience and it has taught me a lot. On top of this, it has been fun! More songs are coming soon, hope you enjoy!
The song is produced with Logic Pro X. Sounds and effects are from Logic’s own library. The video has been made with iMovie. All the clips in the video are downloaded from pixabay.com and are under the licensing of pixabay as well.
I couldn't see any mistakes ! Well done, there is just this sentence...
Especiallly my mixing and mastering outcomes are still under development. This is just a little bit strange. It's fine, everyone will understand, but you could also say: I'm mainly concerned about improving my mixing and mastering.
Or: I'm focussing especially on developing my mixing and mastering (skills)....
Hope that helps.
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