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I Am Traveling in Vietnam
These days, I am traveling again in Vietnam. It is my second time doing so here, and I can remember when I first travelled to Vietnam, I was quite nervous. How, I thought, can I possibly do this by myself?
I also found myself always thinking about how to meet someone, how to find my hostel, how to order some food, etc. I had so many kinds of unfounded worries, but that was 3 years ago. Now, I do not honestly know if I have changed so much from thinking about all of that, but I do know travelling in a foreign country, while not that easy, is certainly not that hard.
Every single day, I am able to find a new place to stay. Vietnam, in some ways, is similar to my country, but here, I can see many motorcycles on the street. There are also many different kinds of food, foreign travelers, etc.
All of it makes me think about who I am, and what is my place in this world. I often think about what I want to do with my life, as well as the things that I need to improve. I had once thought my lack of English limited my travels, yet, I have since discovered that knowing even just a little of it can help them, so as a result, I need to keep studying it..*
Hi, Besty. Good job! The changes that I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.
*I, too, hope to visit Vietnam over my next vacation. It seems like a great place from everything that I have heard!
As to the grammar, be sure to always capitalize proper nouns (such as the word, Vietnam) and pronouns (such as the word, I). Pay more attention to your spelling, as well as learn more vocabulary. The latter will give you more word choices to construct your sentences. I sincerely hope that you enjoy the rest of your time in Vietnam!
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