WRITING PRACTICE : ESSAY Hi everyone, I`m practicing my writing for my cambridge cerfificate, would you help me with some corrections please? Title: Which facilities should receive money from local authorities? + Museums +Sport centres +Public gardens. It`s a real fact that a lot of facilities need founds to provide service to the community , who deserve it more is a difficult choice to make, however I must say that between museums and public gardens, I`d choose the second one. People who live in cities are really stressed, always thinking about problems waiting to be resolve, goals to achive and places to be on time, etc. Therefore this public gardens could bring people the chance to spend some quality time with their famlies, enjoy beautiful landscapes and take some break on daily routine to relax their busy minds. Museums are important too, but not all the people like to visit them because there are some museums where you can`t bring your kids or pets for instance. In my opinion public gardens are the best choice and here is the reason, they could include all community members no matter age or social status. They all would have the chance to spend time with people they care about and take a break from the noisy city. * This is my essay, all corrections and sugestions are welcome, thanks for reading and helping.