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Day 2. There is my second day of writing my personal notebook. I’m still in! Due to bad connection I’m doing it only at 11 pm. Usually at this time I am preparing for my night shift as night auditor. Have you ever heard about Viking River Cruises? This is international cruise company with the head office in Basel. This is the 1st River cruise company in the world. I work here since 2017. On the first season I was a bar waiter, and from the previous season I changed my position to night auditor. My duties included a lot of paper business, work with complains and suggestions, preparing for the daily shift, and also managing our storeroom. I’m not sure I would come back on this position for the next year. Need to improve my knowledges in other area. Would like to be a guide. This is a very important decision in my life, because to be a guide I need to stay in Saint Petersburg, visit special lessons, learn a lot about architecture and history of Spb and also completely change my life. I’m ready for this challenge. Unless now then when? There is nothing to do in my hometown during winter time, only spent time with my friends drinking beer, playing PS4 and sometimes visiting a gym. No self- improvement. That’s exactly what I need. See you tomorrow.

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Day 2.

There(This) is my second day of writing (in) my personal notebook. I’m still in! Due to bad (a) connection(,) I’m doing it only at 11 pm. Usually(,) at this time(,) I am preparing for my night shift as night auditor. Have you ever heard about(of) Viking River Cruises? This is (an) international cruise company with the head office in Basel. This is the 1st River cruise company in the world. I work(have worked) here since 2017. On(During) the first season(,) I was a bar waiter(Maybe bartender, someone who makes and serves drinks from the bar), and from (during) the previous season I changed my position to night auditor. My duties included a lot of paper business, work with complains and suggestions, preparing for the daily(we normally say 'day shift') shift, and also managing our storeroom. I’m not sure I would come back on(to) this position for the next year. Need(I need) to improve my knowledges(knowledge) in other area. Would(I would) like to be a guide. This is a very important decision in my life, because to be a guide I need to stay in Saint Petersburg, visit(take) special lessons, learn a lot about architecture and (the) history of Spb(Saint or St. Petersburg) and also completely change my life. I’m ready for this challenge. Unless(If not) now(,) then when? There is nothing to do in my hometown during winter time, only spent(spend) time with my friends drinking beer, playing PS4 and sometimes visiting a gym. No self- improvement. That’s exactly what I need. See you tomorrow.

Interesting bit here. Sounds like you have the mindset for a bright future. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.

-Jeff

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