Practice of IELTS Writing
It is true that a bad situation might happen on anyone. Some people believe that the best solution is to accept it, while others argue that we should try our best to improve it and make things go to the right direction. Personally, I tend towards the viewpoint that we should try to make the situation being better.
On the other hand, bad situations can have a different extension and intensive, and it can affect from an individual to the whole world. If the economy of the world is getting worse, it might be hard to improve it by a person or a country. For instance, many countries are facing the economic problems that the price of housing, food, and education are increasing continuously for the past 10 years. Some people also believe that life is hard to change, as every decision you made has to base on the many considerations. For example, many people are satisfied with their jobs, but they find it is hard to change it as the insufficient of ability or the negative impact to the family.
On the other hand, some people believe that everyone has unlimited potential to make their life better and more enjoyable. Firstly, even if a difficult global issue, such as global warming, can be improved if all the countries in the world cooperate together. Many organizations have been created for this great purpose, and it has already made some positive effects to societies. Secondly, A bright future is waiting for someone who is well-prepared. Rather than complaint about the difficult life, many people believe that you should always learn the new skills and knowledge which might help you in the future. Nowadays, employers tend to hire someone who owns multiple skills, and it also means greater opportunities for the career and a competitive salary.
In conclusion, although it might be true that a bad situation is hard to change, you still need to try hard to make it better.
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Practice of IELTS Writing
It is true that a bad situation might happen on to anyone. Some people believe that the best solution is to accept it, while others argue that we should try our best to improve it and make things go to in the right direction. Personally, I tend towards the viewpoint that we should try to make the situation being better.On the other hand, bad situations can have a different extension and intensive, and it can affect from an individual to the whole world. If the economy of the world is getting worse, it might be hard to improve it by a person or a country. For instance, many countries are facing the economic problems that the price of housing, food, and education are (is) increasing continuously for the past 10 years. Some people also believe that life is hard to change, as every decision you made (make) has to be base(d) on the many considerations. For example, many people are satisfied with their jobs, but they find that it is hard to change it (the job?) as the insufficient of ability because of their incapability or the negative impact to on the family.
On the other hand, some people believe that everyone has unlimited potential to make their life better and more enjoyable. Firstly, even if a difficult global issue, such as global warming, can be improved if all the countries in the world cooperate together (even if, why did you use it?). Many organizations have been created for this great purpose, and it has already made some positive effects to on societies. Secondly, A bright future is waiting for someone who is well-prepared. Rather than complaint (complaining) about the difficult life, many people believe that you should always learn the new skills and knowledge which might help you in the future. Nowadays, employers tend to hire someone who owns has multiple skills, and it also means greater opportunities for the career and a competitive salary.
In conclusion, although it might be true that a bad situation is hard to change, you still need to try hard to make it better.
As far as I understand, sentences starting with even if are followed by an opposing sentence.
I'll go even if you forbid me to.
Even if you solve her problem, she will not understand you.
Even if it's hot, I will go to work.
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