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happy every day :) My highschool classmates held a patty yesterday.Everyone enjoyed it. We will just say goodbye ..it maybe sad but we've promise to each other that our friendship will never disappear or weaker. We've prayed our bright future,all of us will happy every day.:) I love them.everyone store in my memory,forever. I think we will be linked ,regardless of far distance. Dear my friends .Thank u to be my classmates ,be my friends. Thank u to ever exist in my life. I love u. forever..

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Being Happy Everyday :)

My high school classmates held a patty party yesterday. Everyone enjoyed it.
Soon we will just have to say goodbye...  It maybe may be a little sad but we've have promised to each other that our friendship will never disappear or weaker. slackened.
We've prayed for our bright future and all of us will happy every day everyday. :)
I love them.  Everyone store will in my memory, forever. I think 1 We will be connected linked ,regardless of far distance. 2

 

When using the ellipsis to convey more but need not be said, this epllipsis is made of 3 fullstops not 2.  Also capitalize the first letter of the next word.  No space before comma but a space afterwards.  2 spaces after a full stop or the ellipsis.
My dear my friends . Thank you 3 to be for being my classmates and being my friends.
Thank you to ever exist in my life.

I Love you all forever...

1.  "I think" means you are not sure.  "I believe" means that you are sure.  Don't be iffy in your writing.  It shows you have no conviction since you are writing so positively.

2.  Distance here means far apart.  So "far" is redundant.  You can also write like this, "We will be connected regardless of how far apart we are."

3.  Don't use internet slang or texting shortcuts.  You use so much in your daily life that it becomes a bad habit.  You spell in in full when writing formal essays such as this.  It will be like you going out wearing a blouse with no skirt or pants!

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Happy every day

My highschool classmates held a party yesterday. Everyone enjoyed it.
We would just say goodbye. It may be sad but we promised each other
that our friendships would never disappear or get weaker.
We prayed for our bright future, When all of us would be happy.
I love them. They will remain in my memory forever.
I think we would be in touch,regardless of the far distances.
My dear friends, thank you for being my classmates and my friends.
Thank you for being in my life.
I love you all forever.


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 happy every day :)

My highschool classmates held a party yesterday.Everyone enjoyed it.
We will  say goodbye .maybe it will be sad but we've promised each other
that our friendship will never disappear or weaken.
We  prayed for our bright future,that all of us will be happy every day.:)
I love them.everyone will remain in my memory,forever.
I think we will be linked ,regardless of how far the distance.
Dear my friends .Thank u for being my classmates ,my friends.
Thank u to have ever existed in my life.
I love u. forever..

*this was good I may have butchered ur writing but I think this is what you meant :)

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