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lucky to meet so many true friends As I'm going to a college few days later.I really want to improve my English. I want to be a top student all the time and then I can realize my dream. I've been at Italk for weeks, and here I have been meeting so many friends. They helped me walk out of my trouble and send me nice greetings to let me feel happy. :) Thank u ,all my friends . Whenever and wherever ,I will accompany u as u did. Anyway thank u:)

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lucky to meet so many true friends So Lucky - So Many Friends

In a few days, As I'm will be entering going to a college few days later.I really want to improve my English. I want to strive be a top student all the time and then so that I can realize my dream.


I've have been at Italki for many weeks, and here I have been meeting so many friends.
They helped me walk out of my trouble solve problems and send me nice greetings to let me feel happy. :)


Thank you, all my friends.
Whenever and wherever ,I will accompany u as u did. 1
Anyway thank u:)

1.   This last two sentences are superfluous and long winded.  They add no value to your essay.  画蛇添足.

 網上朋友只是人情常理,非知音也.

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