Please help mewith my english homework
Once upon a time a young soldier who had spent a lot of time in the war, when its ended thesoldier was alone and without money. One day while the soldier was resting under a tree a strange man appeared and promised to help him. The only condition was that for 6 years the soldier could not pray, bathe, shave and should always wear a bearskin. While the time passed, the soldier looked horrible and people ran away when they saw him, but he was very good and helped everyone. One day he helped a man who had lost all his money, and the man took the soldier to his house and introduced his daughters so that one of them would commit to him. Then the soldier again went to travel. Had been 3 years and the soldier returned to his fiancée's house but she did not recognize him then the soldier showed him the other half of the ring and when he recognized it she became very happy.
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Please help mewith my english homework
Once upon a time, there was a young soldier who had spent a lot of time in the war,. Wwhen its ended the soldier was alone and without money. One day while the soldier was resting under a tree a strange man appeared and promised to help him. The only condition was that for 6 years the soldier could not pray, bathe, or shave and should always wear a bearskin. While the time passed, the soldier looked horrible and people ran away when they saw him, but he was very good and helped everyone. One day he helped a man who had lost all his money, and the man took the soldier to his house and introduced him to his daughters so that one of them would commit to him. Then the soldier again went to travel. Had beenAfter 3 years and the soldier returned to his fiancée's house but she did not recognize him thenso the soldier showed himher the other half of the ring and when she recognized it she became very happy.
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Quizás sonaría mejor decir
1) "When the war was ended"
2) "One day, the soldier was resting under a tree WHEN, SUDDENLY, a strange man appeared NEXT TO HIM
3) "but he was A very good PERSON and helped ANYONE"
4) "Then, the soldier went to travel AGAIN"
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Please help mewith my English homework
Once upon a time there was a young soldier who had spent a lot of time in the at war. When it ended, the soldier was alone and without money. One day, while the soldier was resting under a tree, a strange man appeared and promised to help him. The only condition was that for 6 years the soldier could not pray, bathe or shave, and should always wear a bearskin. While the As time passed, the soldier looked began to look horrible and people ran away when they saw him, but he was very good and helped everyone. One day he helped a man who had lost all his money, and the man took the soldier to his house and introduced him to his daughters so that one of them would commit to him (commit to marry him?). Then the soldier again went to travel. Had been away for After the soldier had been away for 3 years, and the soldier he returned to his fiancée's house but she did not recognize him. Then the soldier showed him her the other half of the ring and when she recognized it she became very happy.
Espero que esto te ayude. Creo que debes introducir el anillo antes. Es que cuando lo apareció me preguntaba "Qué anillo?". Una sugerencia solamente :)
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There is no correction. your english is perffect. congatulation
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