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Writing practice 2 - space technology development
Q: Some people think that the government should spend as much money as possible developing space technology for the exploration of the moon and other planets.Other think that this money should be spent solving basic problems of society on earth. Which view do you agree with?
With a rapid development of technology recent years, it seems to be possible to travel or to live in outer-space.However, government have to spend a lot of money on developing technology. Should they keep spending huge money on exploring the universe? In my point of view, the government should spend money on the other ways instead of developing space technology .There are several reasons that why I don’t support the government invest in developing space technology.Technology development would lead to military competition, money could be used on solving more problems of society on earth, and there are still a number of mysterious places in our planet.
First of all, technology is a double-edged sword. No one doubted that technology makes our life more convenient and comfortable. However,it creates some potential problems such as leading to arms race when the government continue spending huge money on developing space technology. More Hi-Tech the government have, the higher reputation they could be built up. There is one kind of symbol of Power who own a rocket or satellite in the space. Back to the Cold War, two Superpowers, the United States and Soviet Union, spent enormous capital on developing military. It would be a vicious cycle of competition if the countries keep expanding their technology.
Secondly,it is better using the capital for solving extant social problems than developing space equipment. As everyone knows, it is a huge investment that building a rocket or space shuttle.Yet the investment could solve more social problems if the government were going to use this capital on giving impetus to the economy,and decreasing poverty and literacy..
Last but not least, there are still a lot of unknown place on earth that we should go to explore such as deep sea and old growth forest. I hope that the government should consider understanding the planet where we are living instead of exploring the unknown universe.
In conclusion,the government should not spend money on developing space technology because it could cause a military competition, at the meanwhile,using the money on solving social problems is more worthy, and there are lots of mysteries place on the earth.
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Writing practice 1 - immigration
So many people think that they would not emigrate from their home country for a long time. There are several reasons explaining why they are not willing to leave their country such as their deep love of home or being inconvenient to deal with the new culture and language. But for me, I would say "Yes".
I would immigrate to live in another place but it doesn't mean I don't love my country. There are two reasons that I have for living in another place.
The first thing is that I suffer from a serious atopic dermatitis because of really bad air pollution. I became impatient with one of the worst air quality in the world. That's why I have to move to a place which has good and clean air quality.
Not only the poor air pollution, but the housing are also the other reason that I want to emigrate from my country. There is an extremely expensive housing price in my country. People in my country are living in a tiny and narrow house with high price.
Also, I think moving to other place where you never live before is a kind of life experience. Comparing to live in same place, living in a new country is more attractive to me.
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It's been a long while since had a writing practice.
And this is my first writing in English here as well.
Your correction helps me to improve my English :)
Have a nice day.
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제26회 한국어능력시험: 대중 매체에서 사건을 보도할 때, 시청자의 알 권리를 위해 사건과 관련된 사람들의 개인 정보를 공개해도 된다는 주장과 개인 정보 공개는 사생활 침해하라는 주장이 있습니다. 이에 대한 자신의 견해를 서술하십시오.
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기자로서 사건을 보도할 때 가장 우선시하는 것은 시청자가 끌리는 토픽을 잡는다는 것이다.
기자가 시청률을 높이기 위해 사건과 관련된 사람들의 개인 정보를 공개하는 경우가 너무나 많다. 그럼으로 각종 피해를 당하는 사람들이나 여러가지 생기게 되었다. 따라서 시청자의 알 권리보다는 나는 개인의 사생활 보호가 더 우선시 해야 한다고 여긴다.
현대 정보화 사회에서 시청자들이 정보를 접수하기가 아주 쉽고 다양하다. 그로 말미암아 대중 매체 간의 경쟁이 여간 심하지 않다. 시청자의 주목을 받기 위해 인심을 부추기는 핫이슈를 찾게 돼 과장하면 할 수록 진실을 잃은 보도가 많아지다. 동업 간의 악성 경쟁뿐만 아니라 당사자나 친가족들에게 손해를 입게 될 수도 있다. 예를 들면, 몇 년 전에 타이완 한 유명한 연예인 바이빙빙의 딸이 납치 당한 사건이었다. 바이빙빙은 신문 기자들에게 딸이 납치 당한 소식을 비밀로 지키라고 부탁했지만 그래도 어느 신문사가 보도를 헸다. 과연 바이빙빙의 딸이 납치범에게 잔혹하게 죽였다. 개인 정보를 당사자 허가를 받지 않은 경우에서 공개 하거나 노출하면 당사자와 친가족 에게 2차 상해라는 손해가 입게 된다. 또한 시청자의 입장으로 볼 땐 개인 사생활을 기자들이 멋대로 공개하면 그 매체에 대한 신용을 잃을 수 있다.
매체는 시청자들의 사회에 대한 소식과 정보를 알리기 위해서 존재하는 것뿐이지. 개인 사생활이 노출되면 사람들이 대중 매체의 신뢰성을 믿기는커녕 시청자들의 가치관이 바뀔 수 있다.말하자면 사람들의 사생활을 누구나 알 수있다는 생각을 생기게 된다 뜻이다.
올바른 대중 매체는 사건을 보도할 때 사람의 사생활 보다는 사건의 진실성을 더 중요시해야 한다.
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