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There are two major approaches of learning in the world, and each one of them has its specific features. However, they both lead to the same goal which is providing students with suitable knowledge for them.
First of all, the traditional view to teaching is still applied in most educational institutions in the world. This view supports the idea of making the student a listener and passive receiver of information. It keeps students away from discovering or making knowledge themselves. This view makes the student an absorber to information made by others.
Nevertheless, there is another modernized view to teaching, which helps students in being involved in making knowledge and discovering things. To illustrate this, this way of education focus on practical things like research and laboratory works and scientific expeditions. It helps student discovering things by themselves rather than keeping them in a classroom and giving them the information passively.
In my opinion, I consider that the second view to teaching is more accurate, because the experience teach students more than listening to the information. In addition, it increases self awareness and self-esteem of students, and makes them effective people in society. Therefore, their point of view to schooling change and they accepts teaching more with this educational way.
To summarize, there are two educational views followed by schools in the world, the passive listening view, and information discovering view and each one of them helps students to get well educated with a difference in the way of providing them with information. The second view is the modern one and it becomes increasingly popular due to its effectiveness in making students knowledge lovers and more self confident.
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Companies can increase the productivity of their employees in many ways. To begin with, companies can encourage their staff by giving awards for the dedicated ones. In addition, companies may be flexible with their staff regarding holidays and work schedules.
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Being expertise in a language or knowing small elements in different languages are different. Being expertise in one particular language helps you to reside in a community where this language is spoken, and it helps you to study in this language. However, knowing small elements in different languages helps you when you are a frequent traveler to various places in the world.
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La musique est très importante pour notre vie et elle a beaucoup de bénéfices, tels que réduire la stress et la dépression. Pour moi, mon style musicale préféré est le style classique. La musique classique est calme et touche l’âme profondément.
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Watching movies is one of my favorite hobbies. The last movie I watched was “divergent”, it is a sci-fi movie, it portrays the world in a way that people are separated into groups according to a test they pass, and the group they belong to reflects their personality. Divergent is a rare character where the individual can belong to many groups, and each group wants to get rid of it. In addition, divergent it is the personality of the main character in the movie. A lot of thrilling and adventurous events happen in the movie.
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Every country has its specific aspects, and people accustomed to entertain themselves in different ways in each country. With respect to entertaining in my country, people often go to the beach, restaurants, and popular fairs. Some of them go to the nightclub that I personally hate. There are many places for entertainment in my country, as there is a great interest in tourism and touristic aspects.
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The appearance of the university campus has a great role in the relationship between students and their university. In my country, the most beautiful university campus is the one that belongs to the national university, which is the university where I studied. Its campus is enormously wide, full of gardens and trees, it’s very serene, tidy , clean, and organised, not everyone can go in and there are beaches everywhere. Each faculty has its own library where students study during breaks. Regarding buildings, they are modern, all have glass walls and they are all painted with the same color, and there are a lot of stairs and pathways connecting the buildings with each others.
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L’internet est plein de sites Web bénéfiques. Personnellement, je visite habituellement les sites qui enseignent les langues, surtout l’anglais et le français, comme “BBC learning English”, “British council” pour l’anglais et “TV 5 monde” pour le français. En ce qui concerne les réseaux sociaux, j’utilise youtube , instagram, et télégramme pour apprendre des langues étrangères, et pour chercher des recommendations pour des bons livres à lire.
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Academic knowledge is a must for student’s knowledge. However, academic knowledge is not alone the most important task for students , practical learning is as important as academic one, because it helps students to understand more the theory they learnt, and for universities’ students, practical training is a must to make strong workers later on.
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Social media has become a key part of our daily life. In universities, at work , and everywhere people rely on social media to communicate with each others. In addition, finding the love of one’s life occurs sometimes on social media. Countless of people had known each others on social media and they ended up married after a while. However, there are a lot of hackers and scammers on social media and people must be aware of this idea before engaging to anyone they got to know him or her on social media. In a nutshell, people must get to know people in real life very well before they marry them, even if they knew them on social media.
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