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Many people suffer pain from too much sitting. Esther Gokhale, an acupuncturist has researched human spine shape. She says we have forgotten how to use our bodies. Some people slump over too much, So they have C shape spine, and others pull their necks forward while their back and butts are pulled back. Both shapes are unnatural and a recipe for body injuries. Ester started her research after having back pain as a young mother. She did some surgery, but it did not work out. She read medical studies and found that traditional cultures don't have this problem, So she decided to study them firsthand. she found that despite having demanding lives these people are pain-free, and it is because of their spine shape which is straight from the top and curves at the bottom.
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I can't understand why in the following sentence "that" before "given" is removed.
Twenty-four of the twenty-five mice given penicillin survived.
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and how about this one :
One famous mold, discovered by accident by a sloppy scientist, became the first antibiotic medicine: penicillin.
(that was discovered?)
I don't know where we can remove relative clauses and "to be verbs".
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Discovery of penicillin
mod is all around us. In the air and on the floor, it can gross us out but not all the mods are bad. Penicillin is the first antibiotic medicine that was discovered by alexander fleming.
The Discovery of penicillin started with Alexander Fleming. A chain of events led fleming to discover penicillin, and it happened accidentally. One day he forgot to clean up his Petri dishes full of harmful bacteria, and when he came back from vacation he saw molds covered Bacteria it was no surprise but what was supising was the mods had killed bacteria.
Fleming knew he was on something but he did not know about producing mods for further research. So he published his research and two chemists noticed and started to produce the mod. Then they tested the mods on 50 mice who had harmful bacteria. Twenty-two of twenty-five mice were given penicillin survived. If these two scientists had chosen guinea pigs instead of mice they would have seen the right result. because penicillin does not affect guinea pigs.
These three scientists won the Nobel prize in 1945. now the doctors had a cure for the disease. If it weren't because of some accidental events, the discovery of penicillin would have never happened.
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It depends on my destination, But I prefer trains. Trains are safe and cheap. You will have more space to move than on the bus to be relaxed until you get to your destination.
You can also see the scenery from a window and enjoy the road trip.It depends on my destination, But I prefer trains. Trains are safe and cheap. You will have more space to move than on the bus to be relaxed until you get to your destination.
You can also see the scenery from a window and enjoy the road trip.
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When I was around 10, a Koeana series was a trend. Most of the people were obsessed with the movie, and they used to watch it every night. My friends and I were obsessed with the main character; she was an extraordinary girl and good in almost everything. For instance, she was terrific at cooking. We had made an imaginary world where we played the movie with each other. We used to mimic the way she was cooking. Everyone got a particular movie's character. This memory might not be memorable, but it is still one of the sweetest memories I have ever had.
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Hi, can anybody explain why there is not a verb or a relative clause after "law" in the following sentence?
for example, "a law that was threatening...."
《Propaganda, as well as a law threatening prison for criticizing the US government, encouraged newspapers to censor the flu and it cost lives.》
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I think so. Well-educated students make future, so governments should invest money in this area. Sophisticated parents can train the next generation perfectly. We can not achieve a well-educated society unless we make education free.
Although this subject seems ideal for now, once we target it and make a plan for it, we will achieve it one day. since making this idea happen is something challenging, we should notice it would consume time
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No, I think having the leadership skill depends on several items like genetic, the environment and the place we live, the way we're raised and trained. The genetic item might play the most important role but, not all the people who are born with this innate feature are going to be a leader. So, for example, they might live in a family which is repressive and strict. Also, some people might not have genetically significant potential for being a leader but, they can be trained and work on themselves, however, it might not be quite accurate for the oldest generation because as we get older it gets more difficult to be trained and make personality changes.
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The definition of beauty has changed in my country thanks to plastic surgery. People have this tendency to change, as they prefer saying modify, their natural beauty.
Standards of beauty have been changing throughout history and, it's perfectly natural as people's attitude has been changing. However, I think nowadays the situation is a little bit complex; In the past, if you were lucky, you would burn with the exact standards of the beauty of your time so, you were considered as a beautiful person and it was all about being lucky. But today there is competition among people; If you don't have beauty standards, you would simply achieve them only by doing some surgeries even though it might cost money and have some dangerous physical consequences.
Plastic surgery is leading people to resemble each other. Therefore, I think natural beauty will be on trend again.
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I've been a couch potato for my whole life, however I've started doing exercise recently.Though there might not be a significant change during this time to mention here, still there are some slight changes that I do believe they can make a tremendous difference in my life by the time. First, I've been exercising regularly during this time so, I think I've been a well-ordered person. Second, I realized I can think better while I'm doing an exercise, specifically running. Moreover, I think after exercising I feel I'm a happier and more energetic person.
In conclusion, I feel these small changes together led me to have a good feeling about myself and going forward and, It'll end up me being a better version of myself.
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I'd like to know how my essay sounds in generla.
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