Can someone check my sentence? This is a email which I have sent recently. Can someone check it and correct? Regarding changing the company name from "Ltd". to "Pvt. Ltd." in the invoice, our purchase person checked with the forwarding company. They said that the part cannot be imported if the name in the IEC code and the name in the invoice is not matching. We have applied for the name change in the IEC code and not yet completed. Therefore kindly you are requested to hold the name change and keep using the old name for a while unless we inform you. Our purchase person will inform you in advance when name is need to be changed in invoiced. We are very sorry for creating confusion.

Can you check ? Work Instruction 1.Pick up the material from the box by the right hand. *Key point: Do not hold the shank portion. *The reason for key point: The part can drop and get damaged 2.Check the part visually. *Key point: It should not be any dents on the surface and no dust should be inside the material *The reason for key point: The cutting tool can get damaged. 3.Pick up the machined part from locator by the left hand. 4.Keep the material on the locator by the right hand. *Key point: The part should not be inclined on the locator. *The reason for key point: The part get damaged or cracked part can hit body. 5.Press the start button by the right hand. 6.Check the part visually and keep the finished part in box by the left hand. *Key point: Check the surface by rotating 360 degree in the sequence of A, B, and C. *The reason for key point: Defect part can go to customer Rule: Stop the machine, call the team leader,and wait for the instruction in case the abnormality was found

A lamp turns on and a buzzer sounds? I frequently use below sentence in my office, when I make work instruction for production line. Is it correct? "When pokayoke(fool proofing device) detects defect part, machine stops and lamp turns on control panel and a buzzer sounds." "When pokayoke(fool proofing device) detects defect part, machine shall stop and lamp shall turn on control panel and a buzzer shall sound." *Should I put "shall" for all verb?

How to say when I want someone to give self introduction? How to say when I want someone to give self introduction? Is there more polite way of asking for a self introduction? For example. Can you introduce yourself? Can you give a self introduction?

Self-introduction Hello, though I have been posting my writing 3 years ago. I have stopped posting due to some reasons. Now I want to start again to polish my English, so I have written about myself because there are many occasions on which I have to speak about myself. I am bandobast. I was born in India and raised in Japan. Both my parents are Japanese. My father was working as diplomat and my mother was working as nurse in India when I was born. Speaking of my father, he studied in B.A Hindi in Japan and M.A Hindi in India. He speaks Hindi fluently and was learning Sanskrit, Bengali, Punjabi. He was like more scholar than diplomat. He passed away in 1998. About mother, she worked in institute for leprosy behind Taj Mahal and she was nurse as a member of medical team sent by Japanese government. She is still nurse working in day care center in Japan. She speaks little bit Hindi since she need it for communicate to patient when she was working in India. After completing my father's tenure, our family returned to Japan. That was a year after my birth. I studied in Hindi diploma course in Japan after my graduation from senior school and I came to India when I was 21. However I was not interested in Hindi nor India till 19. I was more interested in Archaeology,but I faced deadlock in my life. I failed in college entrance exam continuously for two years.This incident made me to think about my nature and my way of living very deeply. During that time my father brought me brochure of language school of Hindi, Chinese, Arabian and Indonesian. I thought that there must be meaning why I failed exam and met Hindi. I chose Hindi and studied for 2 years. After graduation, I have studied B.A in Hindi and B.Com. Now I live in India and got Indian citizenship too. I got married with Japanese who was my classmate of language school in Japan and have two daughters. My wife has done Ph.D Hindi and now work as freelancer in Japanese-Hindi translation. This is brief introduction about me.

Hindi: बंदोबस्त मैं इंटरनेट पर अपना हैण्डल नेम को बंदोबस्त रख़ा करता हूँ। मैं समझता हूँ कि बंदोबस्त थोडा अजीब सा नाम है। मैं लोगों से यह कभी नहीं पूछा कि बंदोबस्त नाम रखना कितना अजीब लगता है। थोडा सा है या ज्यादा है ? अगर आप उदाहरण के साथ बता सकते हैं तो शायद मैं अच्छी तरह समझ पाऊँगा। लेकिन चाहे कोई भी बोले मुझे यह नाम बहुत पसंद है। बंदोबस्त का मुख्य मतलब है "व्यवस्थित करना"। मुझे अव्यवस्थित चीज़ को व्यवस्थित करने में आनंद महसूस होता है जैसा अपना सामान पर नाम लिखना, रखने की जहग निश्चित करना इत्यादि। लेकिन मुझे जापान जैसा अत्यधिक व्यवस्थित माहौल पसंद नहीं है क्योंकि मेरे नज़र में जापानी समाज लोगों से भी अत्यधिक व्यावस्थित रहने को माँगता है यानि अत्यधिक तमीज़ से रहना । जब आप भारत से जापान जाते हैं तो शायद यह महसूस करेंगे कि जापान में भारत की तुलने में शोर बहुत कम रहता है। समय पर चलना या करना तथा शोर नहीं मचाना, ये जापान में रहने के लिए आधार नियमों का नमूना हैं। जापान के सामाजिक नियमों के अनुसार तमीज़ से रहने में कई चीज़ों पर ध्यान रखना ज़रूरी हैं, नहीं तो आप को लोगोंने शिकायत करेंगे या उपेक्षा करता सा नज़रों से आप को देखते रहेंगे। मुझे ये करते करते थक चुका हूँ। कभी कभी अमानवीयता भी महसूस होती है। खैर, फिर भी मैं अपनी पुरानी आदत की वजह से अव्यवस्थित चीज़ को व्यवस्थित करने को पसंद करता हूँ। बंदोबस्त का नाम इस पुरानी आदत की देन है।

120101 Tamil: May I request you for checking my senteces? வணக்கம் நீங்க எப்படி இருக்கீங்களா? புத்தாண்டு வாழ்த்துக்கள் ! நேற்று நான் நண்பனோடு பாடீக்கு போநேன் பாடீ நல்ல இருதது நான் கௌஞ்சம் தமிழ் பேசுவேன் முதன்முத்லாக நான் பேனா நண்பகளும வேணும தயவுசெய்து எழுதுங்க நன்றி

111213 English: May I ask for checking below sentences? I like taking picture(photography?) of flowers, because I feel calm when I look flower through finder of camera.(camera finder?) At the moment, I forget all tension in office in which(where?) I always struggle to complete given task on time, where I have to adjust distance with senior colleague who is very much short temper and I don't know when his emontion get exploded(haha), where I have to keep remembering all tasks given to local staff who frequently delay in work and I have to follow them in the manner which make them work fast but should not get them hurt. What I do is simply doing my best. I keep telling myself. "No need to hurry, no need to be anxious, don't show myself as if big nor small , don't be estatic nor envious, live as I am. Then I feel relaxed(I relax?) But sometime I get tired even after all my effort to reduce my tension. At the time, I look finder and take picture of flowers who live as they are.

111213 English: May I ask for checking below senteces? I like taking picture(photography?) of flowers, because I feel calm when I look flower through finder of camera.(camera finder?) At the moment, I forget all tension in office in which(where?) I always struggle to complete given task on time, where I have to adjust distance with senior colleague who is very much short temper and I don't know when his emontion get exploded(haha), where I have to keep remembering all tasks given to local staff who frequently delay in work and I have to follow them in the manner which make them work fast but should not get them hurt. What I do is simply doing my best. I keep telling myself. "No need to hurry, no need to be anxious, don't show myself as if big nor small , don't be estatic nor envious, live as I am. Then I feel relaxed(I relax?) But sometime I get tired even after all my effort to reduce my tension. At the time, I look finder and take picture of flowers who live as they are.