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Increase communication between people
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It is crucially important for people to communicate to each other. Some of them suggest that they do it less than in the past. However, I believe that it is not true. Nowadays socialization has become stronger. I think this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the Internet allows to communicate easier. Restrictions such as distance, language border have disappeared. People communicate, share their opinions, provide information to persons who live in other country and use other language. The Internet allows to join people in a simple way. Also, humans who are not able to meet other people can communicate with them using the network. For instance, during Covid-2019 pandemic I am able to see and talk to my relatives using e-services. However, if this pandemic was in the past, people didn’t have to communicate with each other. Therefore, modern technologies improve people’s socialization.
Furthermore, people spend less time on their job. In the past a lot of humans worked more than 11 hours a day. After the work time people needed a rest and not to socialize with each other. However, nowadays due to the improvements in work conditions they work about 8 hours. Therefore, people have more free time. Using this time persons communicate with each other more than in the past. Nowadays humanity spends a lot of time on socialization. Also, a lot of activities have appeared. Therefore, people use them and their time to improve their communication.
In conclusion, I believe that people socialize more than they did it in the past. The main reason is that technologies allows them to interact with each other. Also, new work conditions provide people the opportunity to spend more time with each other.
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Decrease of cars number in twenty years
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It is crucially important that people use a lot of cars. They travel using vehicles, go to work by their cars. There are a large number of vehicles in cities. I believe, that it will not continue. In other words, the number of vehicles in cities will decrease in twenty years. I think this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the main reason of decrease cars number is changes of generation. Young people think more about the environment. They are interested in pollution reducing more than elder persons. Therefore, in twenty years they will become adults, who will able to affect the humanity. Their goal is to save the environment. However, cars produce air and water pollution. Therefore, these persons will fight with the increase of cars number. So, I believe due to replacing of generation there will be fewer vehicles.
Furthermore, changes can appear in recent years due to activists. They affect government with a lot of requests. Therefore, governments are trying to solve environmental problems. For instance, the control of vehicles number in city center is appeared. The managers of city improve public transport. It allows citizens to remain their own car near the house and go to work by mass transport. Also, the managers reduce number of free parking. Therefore, a lot of people don’t want to use their own cars in the city.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the number of vehicles will decrease in the nearest future. It will appear due to people’s attitude to the environment. Persons who are interested in nature and environment will replace government managers. They will try to change the number of cars. Also, these changes are appear nowadays due to the collaboration of activists and city managers.
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Benefits of living in the countryside during the childhood
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It is crucially important that childhood has a significant purpose in all human life. Some people suggest that children have to live in cities cause of a lot of opportunities. However, growing in the country has a number of benefits. Personally, I believe that childhood in the countryside has more advantages than in large city. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the large city has a number of problems such as environment. A lot of cars and manufactures produce air and water pollution. Therefore, the environment becomes unhealthy. Due to this children’s health is affected. On the other hand, fresh air and water in the countryside allows to grow strong. Adults who has grown in the country are affected by illness less than who has grown in the large city. My brother lived in the village all his childhood and I lived in the city. Now he looks more healthy than me.
Furthermore, there is another problem of living in large city. Nowadays people are creating high buildings with a lot of flats. Everybody can suggest that living with a lot of people in one house provide healthy and strong socialization. However, that is not true at all. Living in these flats reduce quality of people contacts. On the contrast, living in small houses in the village allows to communicate with each other. Therefore, countryside allows children to socialize. They communicate more with each other than children in cities. Ability to communicate is a crucial ability in our world. Also, friendship between children is strong, and it becomes stronger when people grow in the country.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that living in the countryside is more beneficial than in the large city. Due to the different environment and living style children in the village grow healthy and communicative.
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Doing research with Internet sources
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It is critically important that scientists improve the society with their researches. It is important and complicated work. Therefore, a lot of people sagest that to make a good project scientists have to use paper sources such as books. Personally, I believe this is not necessary, good research may be made with Internet sources. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the Internet has a significant advantage. It is easier to find and use information. Person doesn’t need to search books in libraries or their fellows. In addition, all paper sources exist in the network. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I make a research in quantum computations. Therefore, I need to find and study a number of articles. The Internet allows to search quickly. Another benefit is that one can communicate with the researchers in simple way, just to write on their emails.
Furthermore, the online sources allows to use up-to-date works. To print book or research in the magazine and distribute it one have to spend a lot of time. Therefore, sometimes people don’t read it in time. For instance, I knew about quantum supremacy made by Google team earlier than I saw the paper article. The time between these two events was about a month. During this time one can understand a research, think about it. Furthermore, the person also is able to start their own work in this field of science.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that Internet sources of scientific articles have a number of benefits. This is because they provide access to all research. One can easy to communicate with a researcher. Also, this access is up-to-date. People don’t need to wait for the work being printed.
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Advantages of the Internet distribution
Nowadays a lot of people use the Internet. It allows them to share information. However, the part of humanity thinks that has a number of negative sides. Personally, I believe that spreading of this network has a lot of benefits.
To begin using the Internet people are able to study. There is a lot of information and courses, which help to improve skills. This education is crucial for students who is not able to go in school and university. To illustrate these benefits I can say about myself. I am interested in quantum computing, however there are no sources of information except the Internet. I find articles and study the subject using this network. Therefore, the Internet allows a lot of people to share information such as scientific reports and books. This also has another effect. It reduces the social gap providing knowledge access for all humanity without any restrictions.
Furthermore, the social networks allow to spread news quickly. It is crucial for a number of reasons. For instance, people are able to make their plans considering situation. I have had such experience. During the beginning of Covid-2019 pandemic I was in Moscow and studied at university. However, when the number of diagnoses started to increase in the city, I suggested to go to my hometown and isolate myself. News, which were provided in time, reduced the spreading disease risk, and made me more careful. Therefore, access to the Internet is significant in such cases.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the Internet help people in number of cases. This is because, it provides access to education sources and scientific researches. Also, the network allows to share news and inform society.
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