Sentence Correction 1.Drawing has been considered to be a principal subject as same as maths, geometry and philosophy since ancient Greek. 2.Drawing has been considered to be a principal, which is the same as maths, geometry and philosophy, since ancient Greek. Could you help to correct these two sentences?

2 sentences -While I disagree with the idea that both local community and children would have advantages by the volunteer work from children, I do believe that a fair payment to children would help them recognise their value in a society. -It is sometimes agreed that both local communities and children would have advantages from volunteer works provided by children in a local community. However, I do not think it would be a good idea to force children to do unpaid work.

Thank Letter 1 Dear Manager, I am writing to thank both you and your staff for making us a memorable celebration last Friday evening. I made a reservation for 20 people at very short notice last Friday, and we were surprised to finding a table for such a large group. Waiters were very friendly and attentive, and we could not have asked for a better restaurant to host an event. Yours faithfully, xxx

Invitation Letter 2 Dear James, I hope it finds you well. I'm just writing to invite you to my birthday party that is holding next Friday. I'm currently live in Shanghai and work for a design company. Are you still live in Shanghai? We haven't met each other since we graduated last year. if yes, just come along to my house next Friday. If not, you can stay over at my place if you don't mind. The party will start at 6 pm next Friday. There will have board games and video games. Let me know what's your favourite games and I can make it. Feel free to contact me if you have any special requirement during the party. I hope you'll have a great time next Friday. Best regards, xxx

Invitation Letter 1 Dear Neighbour, I hope this letter finds you well. I’m your new neighbour who just moved into this district last week. I’m writing to invite you to join a welcome party I held in my new house. The party will start at 6 pm next Friday, and I’ll be cooking a meal at my house. All the vegetables I used are planted by myself on the roof of my house. And my homemade pickle tomato is also ready to eat. Moreover, there will have different types of drink served in the party. Do you drink alcoholic? If yes, I suppose you will like the Chinese sweet rice wine. On one more positive note, it will be video game time after finishing the dinner. You can bring your favourite video game on that day if you want. After the party finished, you can take the free mini bus to back home. I hope you’ll have a great time next Friday. Best regards, xxx

Complaint Letter 2 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain the insufficiency of customer service on your company for the camera, Nikon D5000, that I bought from a official authorised photographic shop in the city centre on 31st March 2017. I am a photographer who want to buy a professional DSLR camera. The function of this camera totally fulfilled my requirements. And it worked normally when I tried it in the shop. Unfortunately, your product has not performed well since I used twice. I then returned the camera to the customer service centre for a repair. But I was disappointed because the staffs in the customer service centre are inattentive and irresponsible. After several times request, my camera, without any further reply from your company, has still not been repaired. To resolve this problem, I would appreciate your repair or refund for this product. Enclosed are the copies of my record including the receipt and serial number. I look forward your reply and resolution of my problem until the end of this month before seeking help from a Better Business Bureau. Please contact me at the above address or by phone. Yours faithfully xxx

Complain Letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to regard my discontent about the disturbance incurred by a night club near the residential area. I am a resident from Golden Lion Garden who being bearing the noise every night. I am a labour in a fast food factory nearby who have to start work at 7am every day. Because of the importance of food industry in this district, many people work in such factories which have to get up in very early morning. They have complained this situation to the manager of the club, but nothing changed. As a result of this noise disturbance, my sleeping quality reduced extremely since the club opened. My general practitioner advise my to take melatonin for a remedy. I need to undertake an accidental cost for my health that did not be covered in my medical insurance. On behalf of the residents in this area, firstly, I draw your attention to constrain the opening hours of such night clubs located near residential areas during weekdays. Then, more noise barrier can be provided to isolate the noise. Thirdly, enhancing the acoustic insulating ability of commercial buildings can also reduce the disturbance. Your faithfully xxx My Comment: 1. Beginning：I am writing with grave regard to.. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction/discontent with the.. 2. sleep quality 3. take sth. as a remedy 4. constrain: limit sth's development in a particular way restrict: limit size, range , amount, action, or movement restrain: to stop sth by physical force 5. reduce = relieve, alleviate, mitigate, lighten ( for work load, worry, debt(debt vs liability: liability is a legal responsibility for sth, e.g. pay money that is owed or for damage or injury)) 6. Ending: (Sample) I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem and will wait until (set a time limit) before seeking help from a consumer protection agency or the Better Business Bureau. Please contact me at the above address or by phone at (home and/or office numbers with area code).

A Great Wall What I would like to introduce today is a great wall that you have never seen. It was . In contrast to the well-known Great Wall, this great wall stood up in the desert around two thousands years ago. Because of the extreme environment and limited technology, the wall was built by benches of tree and soil with gravel instead of bricks. After thousands years' corrosion and destroy, only the ruin of this great wall is remained.