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School is always regarded as a place where can help the young man to increase their knowledge and improve their employability. In my opinion, the school’s academic curriculum is important to students but if them do not understanding how to tell form right and wrong things them cannot achieve success in their career.
Many teacher thought that students should focus on thier core subject, as those subject can decide whether them can enter a good university in the future. There is a very simple reason for this concept, the knowledge of their core subject can provide a firm fundation for their university studying so that they can find a better job when them graduate. For example, if they gain/acquire a great mathematical ability in the period of middle school, they can building mathematical model to analyse data in university and them can choice those works about finacial analyst or engineer when they enter society. If students spent too much time to learn those moral principles and behavioral regulation, they are less likely to focus on key discipline.
School can import some important vitues into students let them know how to make good use of their knowledge and how to be a useful people for society. If one can bear the loyalty in his mind, he or she will not betray their company to sell secret documant to competitor. Engineer who are conscious of social responsibility are more likely to design safe product which can denefit consumers. Students who can achieve a good academic performance in school may also hard to be succeed if he or she do not comply with moral rules.
To my mind, the antecedent condition for students to achieve success is them know how to distinguish right from wrong. Students need to respect their teachers and get good alone with their schoolmates. if them do not recognize this problem, those thing not only affect their studying but also their future work.
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《Should we pay tax to the state? 》
Many people may complain that tax is a heavy burden, because it can reduce their disposable income. but i think that we need to pay tax , because if don’t have revenue the society will hard to function.
Government can finance some public facility projects, such as roads,shools and hospitals, through the revenue. if we don’t have a excellent transport system, people’s commuting will become difficult, and traffic congestion will also bring a adverse impact. community school can provide the chance for those children who are too poverty to access to studing and it will be benifital to economy if them can learn more knowledges. those community project ganerally can not be supported by private companies, due to it’s not profitable. so, we have to realize that the government can accomplish the aim of finacial re-distribution via the manner of taxing. for example, in some countries, them levy high-income class with higher tax, but the low-income class can receipt the financial aid from governments.
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Need correction/ Distance education
The coming of Internet has led the way of people’s working and living changed. The numbers of people who want to try distance education are growing, because it can provides them an opportunity to get a degree in their own houses. despite distance-learning are differ with traditional college education, it still have some advantages in some aspects.
Be compare with traditional education, distance education are more flexible, so it will allow more people have access to education. When students need search some educational resources, them can watch video curriculums. If them have questions them can stop or replay the video, until them totally understand. Moreover, those distance education are available in whole day form Monday to Sunday, it is very convenient for those people who always be busy.
On the other hand, distance education also can promote the conversation between students and teachers. Through some interactive tools in virtual classroom, students can ask their teacher question more easily. In this case, them can receive their tutor‘s advises, thereby completing all curriculums more effectively. In sometimes, them even can contact with scholars in world-famous universities, although them are living in their own countries.
One of the main disadvantages of distance education is it cannot promote student’s conversation skill, because distance education usually don’t have group work. Students are study alone, doesn’t have any chances to meet others. Them cannot broaden their social connections, it may have some adverse impact for their career development.
Because the convenience of distance education, it can popularize college education. But some disadvantages, like lacks interaction, lead it can not provide same outcomes like traditional education.
June 15, 2020
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Air travel
there are some people believe that more expensive air ticket can reduce the air pollution made by air industry. Because it will bring about people giving up their ideas that traveling to other place and the greenhouse gas discharged by airplane will decline if the number of the air flights drops. As well as, other questions about air industry like noise pollution, airport or relative facilities’ construction could be improved.
As I see, for the goal to protecting environment through increase ticket price is more disadvantages than advantages, because it is relaxing that having chance to travel other place with a low cost. Most people who live in the city are really stressful , especially those worker working in the metropolitan city. If air ticket is cheap them can travel to distant place to enjoy their holiday. For example, Chinese tourists can travel to some tropical counties and taste those local food rather than stay in home.
In broad term, the view about restricting air flight is irrational, cheap air ticket price is beneficial to public. Otherwise air companies should take responsibility to reduce environment pollution trough technical innovation.
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Title:Law ( need correction! thanks!:) )
The laws is regarded as the regulation imposed on human beings. Although laws play an important role in regulating our behavior, I still believe that strict laws can also restrict human’s freedom.
If no law to regulate human behavior, a country would be in chaos and the economy would collapse. For example, if some people do not obey traffic regulations, traffic accidents will increase and traffic jam will become a problem. If those people who sale fake productions are not punished, consumers will worry to buy productions in internet and the country will suffer economically.
Similarly, moral rules and social regulations are also important to our social stability, if people do not abide them, then the respect and the belief between people will be destroyed. As we can see, people can do something that harmful to others in sometimes, just for their self-interest. For instance, if people betray the trust of their business partners or do not fulfil their promises, they will not work together and social cohesion will be under treat.
However, it is unavoidable that laws restrict private liberty or even restrain social development in sometimes. Such as business laws, which may bring about the shrinkage of business activity, but it also ensure a healthy market environment in the long term. Or such as levy high income tax for high-income citizens, which may lead to those people lose their enthusiasm to create wealth, but it can reduce the gap between the rich and the poor. Maybe it can be useful to promote social progress that the governments release some restriction in some area, and encourage people to innovate.
It is obvious that society will be a mess is no laws or rules to regulate. Even though laws can not allow everyone to act at will, the main purpose of laws is to create a society that people can live harmony.
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Low-cost airline
Low-cost airline allow us to access a cheaper cross-border travel. In my opinion, though cheap air services are beneficial to our daily life, we still need to restrain our unnecessary travels for the sake of environment problem.
People can make visit to various country through the air travel industries. In this case, it can provide them the knowledge of other countries and the opportunity to obtain a job in other countries. Some of those people who work in the other country can access to a better career and have a higher income. In the same way, some business men can find price difference between in the countries when they are in traveling, they can get profit through import or export productions. But if the price of air ticket rise, all of they will lose those chances.
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Should raise the air price to reduce environment pollution?(Hope for a correction)
Low-cost airline allow us to access a cheaper cross-border travel. In my opinion, though cheap air services are beneficial to our daily life, we still need to restrain our unnecessary travels for the sake of environment problem.
People can make visit to various country through the air travel industries. In this case, it can provide them the knowledge of other countries and the opportunity to obtain a job in other countries. Some of those people who work in the other country can access to a better career and have a higher income. In the same way, some business men can find price difference between in the countries when they are in traveling, they can get profit through import or export productions. But if the price of air ticket rise, all of they will lose those chances.
On the other hand, there are some people believe that more expensive air ticket can reduce the air pollution made by air industry. Because it will bring about people giving up their ideas that traveling to other place and the greenhouse gas discharged by airplane will decline if the number of the air flights drops. As well as, other questions about air industry like noise pollution, airport or relative facilities’ construction could be improved.
As I see, for the goal to protecting environment through increase ticket price is more disadvantages than advantages, because it is relaxing that having chance to travel other place with a low cost. Most people who live in the city are really stressful , especially those worker working in the metropolitan city. If air ticket is cheap them can travel to distant place to enjoy their holiday. For example, Chinese tourists can travel to some tropical counties and taste those local food rather than stay in home.
In broad term, the view about restricting air flight is irrational, cheap air ticket price is beneficial to public. Otherwise air companies should take responsibility to reduce environment pollution trough technical innovation.
May 15, 2020
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Need correction!Please help me . Thank a lot . _____Title : migration.
Nowadays, more and more people living in countryside are transfer to cities. They may believe that they will be more easily to access to a job in the city, and city living are more comfortable than the countryside’s, but it is notable that this tendency may cause some adverse impacts.
There are two main reasons why these people used to choose living in the city. Firstly, the density of city’s population is more large, and cities can provide more working opportunities, people who living in the city are relatively obtain much higher income than others living in country. This means that the people can buy more production with their life standard rising. By contrast, in the rural area ,the job opportunity are rare, as many business are underdeveloped and the residents’ ability to consume is limited. The other reason is the inhabitants living in cities can more convenient to access public service and also can enjoy better life standard, including education, medical treatment. Therefore, young couple desire get rid of poverty through their children accept better education in the city.
But the city’s population rising will boost pressure for the public facilities and housing supplying. Some cities have not enough land source to accommodate too many people. Many migrant need to living in the slum and tolerate there harsh life condition, because they can not afford for them own house. People will more easily to get sick, due to the city’s facilities can not completely satisfy with supplying of clean water, disposing of household wastes and refining of waste water.
The income gap between urban and rural areas has increased and it is the main reason for countryside migration. Those young man who are ambitious, vigorous, diligent and creative are willing to find jobs or attend school in the city rather than rural area. In this case, it is really hard to prosper rural economics under the problem with lack labor force. But on other hand, some urban youths choose committing crime, because the income gap inside the city.
In conclusion, the depressed future of career and economy in rural area lead the migration. This is a worrying trend.
May 14, 2020
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Find a partner
I’m learning English now , and I want find a partner to practice. I want someone who are a native speaker of English and want to learn mandarin so I can help him/her to improve him/her mandarin.
In my plan , We can be the teacher for each other, and we can practice each other . we can have many interaction such as talking 、 giving a lesson ....
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Need correction —— Overusing
Nowdays People like use products only once rather than reusing them for a long time.It is important to understand the reason why this problem happened and how to resolve this problem.
With the increasing of people’s incomes, they can buy many things that more than ever past.The development of technology and the volume production can reduce the costing, but it also cloud improve people’s productivity.Today, Some electrical production , such as mobile phone and computer, can be brought with very low price, so when some items broken people seldom repair them.Especially, some young people are prefer to buy the latest phones with up-to-date feature, at the same time, they throw the old one away.
The other reason is people lack environmental consciousness.People don't realize their consumption habit may cause energy consumption and create rubbish and pollution.They don’t know those household appliance will be wastage at last and really difficult to decompose , It will cause huge damage for the environment.As they lack the knowledge about that recycling many production can lead our life style become more environment-friendly.
Because of the excessive consumption more and more commonly, It is vital to taking some strategy to cope with environment pollution.In a meantime, we need to improve the environmental awareness, that will be a good method to change the way that people using or disposing their production. Environmental group should spread that knowledge about how to reuse the disposable productions and household appliance.The authority should also formulate some legislation to restrain people to overusing consumer goods.For example , authority can levy a duty on the disposable goods, such as plastic bag, so that It can encourage people to use the environmental shopping bag.
In summarize, the main reason of overconsuming is people’s attitude and disposable income increasing.If we want to solve this problem, the most things that we need to consider is improving people’s awareness about environment protecting and they will change their life style.
May 7, 2020
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