[Practice1]Please help to correct and modify it to more commonly by english native use. [thankyou] *******************************************Title******************************************************** Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. **************************************************************************************************** I disagree for the opinion of admin themselves on their own I always think that the parent should let the child decide themselves on their own. No matter how the things they do is big or small, they have their own brain, and parent can not together with their child for all the time while the child the whole life, that is not mean to the child should not take part in the pubic activities, but at least the parent should let the child make plan by the way they interesting with. Human is the social animals, we have this important paremeter during the days we alive everyday, please don’t worried about we will become alone. I am a father and have a son in seven year old and primary school, some students in his class have less time to have their game when spare time, parents will say many words to them and register much class outside school with English training, sing song, painting and so on, after talked with my son with this situation, children will talk about the real inner thing to the good friends, All the free time in occupied by the decision of their parents. In other words, they lose theirself sometimes. Children should t learn how to make plans for themselves. This is much good for the time when they study in college or work. There is no way to get this point in one day, it must be trained in right way from their parents at the beginning.