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It's important for me.Please help me correct my article!Thank you! The Most Embarrassing Day In May Life The most embarrassing day I remember in all my life is the one that I participated in a long distance race in high school. Every time I think about this experience, I feel a lot embarrassed. However, it still inspires me to move forward in a certain way. Because I like running, I am full of confidence to participate in the 1500 running race. In the days before the competition, I informed my teachers and classmates that I would take part in the competition and hoped that they would cheer me on. However, I don't know why on the day of the game I was so scared that I kept thinking I would lose, I even wanted to escape. My friends didn't see the panic in me, and the game was starting. At the beginning, I was not far behind the rest of the team, but by the second lap, I was not good, I did not dare to push hard, afraid there was no physical strength behind. So I slowed down and watched the others running away. My teachers and classmates saw me falling behind and kept cheering me on, I felt so ashamed. I kept my head down and tried to run faster, but I was exhausted. I gave up and walked on the track. The staff of the sports meeting cheered me on the platform with the microphone, they said: "come on, you can!" I felt more ashamed. Finally, I trotted to the end. What a embarrassing day, it affected me a lot, and I felt ashamed of myself for giving up. But I also want to thank it. Now whenever I meet with difficulties, I won't be scared, I will solve it bravely. ps:Please help me to make the article more fluent and rammar more localized, thank you very much.
March 11, 2020
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