American slang Hey I want to use some slang phrases. Do you also use them or do they sound strange? -a doozy -our of hand -hold your horses -Kumpf the gun -draw the line -go easy on -rise and shine -add fuel of the fire -pep talk -make ends meet -on the fence -speak of the devil -hang by a thread Thank you! And if you add any more, I would be very grateful 🌻

CAN SOMEONE CORRECT MY ARGUMENTATION? HI; THANK YOU A LOT FOR TAKING THE TIME TO FIX MY TEXT. IF YOU CAN ADD SOME LINKING WORDS OR ANOUTHER ARGUMENT THAT WOULD BE GREAT AS WELL, THE TASK WAS: *IMAGINE YOU WANTED TO TRAVEL AROUND THE WORLD FOR ONE YEAR BUT YOUR PARENTS/TEACHERS ARE STRICTLY AGAINST IT. WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR HEADMASTER IN WHICH YOU ARGUE IN FAVOUR OF YOUR VOYAGE AND EXPLAIN QHY IT IS SO IMPORTANT TO YOU. * Dear Mr. Aarens, I am writing this letter to ask you for the permission that I can travel around the world for one year. I know that you are stricly against such an idea, but here are my reasons. First of all I want to teach independence. I feel myself so depentend from my parents and think it would be extremely helpful if I can change this. For instance my parents have to pick up me from school and every other place and buy food for me. How can I know how to manage my life after school? It would be the best to learn and improve myself in this category as early as possible. Furthermore travelling is the best way to learn something about new culture and new languages. It can takes you months or years to teach to any language to fluency in school and you even can only get to know about the culture from the school books and from films. However, I can imagine the everyday life without living it. To regard to my mental health, it would improve it and I can develop myself in almost every sense. This voyage will bring myself to my limits and how to deal with difficult situations, which I never had before. Like to book an accomodation or how to spend my money well. I hope these arguments can change your mind and you will approve the journey for me. Sincerely Anne-Kathrin Huber

can someone improve my comment? ,,Sometimes we win, sometimes we learn“ (Robert Kiyosaki) In this comment I would like to discuss the question whether to try and fail, or not to try at all“ I am definitely the opinion of Robert Kiyosaki and than never try something at all. Fear is a sign that we are alive, it is not a bad thing. We have the fear of failure and we live in a world where popular culture, celebrities or public speakers say that if you chase your dreams you will achieve them. This message of chase your dreams and you will 100% get there. We will fail and failure will be an absolute component of our path to success. But when we believe, what Robert Kiyosaki said about sucess, we can’t fail. When we can’t fail, why are so many people afraid of realise their dreams? We are afraid oft the opion of other people and the fact we have to get of our comfort zone. If we we are to really succeed, if we are to really go far in life we are going to actually have to brak down these barriers and step out side of our comfort zone. In the book the 4-hour-work-week from Tim Ferris he gave the reader the task to lay down on a plublic place, where many people are. The result of the most readers, who did this was, that the majority didn’t really cared about. And the few people, who looked at them just went on. The thing is In a world in where everybody is worrying about what other people think of them, nobody cares really. We are so busy with ourself and our own problems that we don’t really care about the failure of others. We get a bad mark when we write a bad answer or a wrong solution. We learn if we have no failures it is perfect and we get a great mark. So we are afraid to fail and actually never begin to try it. But this is wrong we have to learn again that failures are good. We can’t learn without them. If we do everything right in our entire life we would never be hurt or even feel the sense of the down. Is this the right way to live a life ? No, definitely not. We will never increase and make the best of our self. When we risk something we can feel this great sense of liberation, that fills us. All in all, if you don’t want to regret something in your deathbed you have to leave your comfort zone, because life begins at the end oft this zone. You also have to give no attention what other people say and understand, that failure is nothing bad, you can only learn something. So let’s reach your goals and overcome te fear of failure!

can someone improve my comment because of the spelling? ,,Sometimes we win, sometimes we learn“ (Robert Kiyosaki) In this comment I would like to discuss the question whether to try and fail, or not to try at all“ I am definitely the opinion of Robert Kiyosaki and than never try something at all. Fear is a sign that we are alive, it is not a bad thing. We have the fear of failure and we live in a world where popular culture, celebrities or public speakers say that if you chase your dreams you will achieve them. This message of chase your dreams and you will 100% get there. We will fail and failure will be an absolute component of our path to success. But when we believe, what Robert Kiyosaki said about sucess, we can’t fail. When we can’t fail, why are so many people afraid of realise their dreams? We are afraid oft the opion of other people and the fact we have to get of our comfort zone. If we we are to really succeed, if we are to really go far in life we are going to actually have to brak down these barriers and step out side of our comfort zone. In the book the 4-hour-work-week from Tim Ferris he gave the reader the task to lay down on a plublic place, where many people are. The result of the most readers, who did this was, that the majority didn’t really cared about. And the few people, who looked at them just went on. The thing is In a world in where everybody is worrying about what other people think of them, nobody cares really. We are so busy with ourself and our own problems that we don’t really care about the failure of others. We get a bad mark when we write a bad answer or a wrong solution. We learn if we have no failures it is perfect and we get a great mark. So we are afraid to fail and actually never begin to try it. But this is wrong we have to learn again that failures are good. We can’t learn without them. If we do everything right in our entire life we would never be hurt or even feel the sense of the down. Is this the right way to live a life ? No, definitely not. We will never increase and make the best of our self. When we risk something we can feel this great sense of liberation, that fills us. All in all, if you don’t want to regret something in your deathbed you have to leave your comfort zone, because life begins at the end oft this zone. You also have to give no attention what other people say and understand, that failure is nothing bad, you can only learn something. So let’s reach your goals and overcome te fear of failure!

What is worse, to try and fail or not to try at all Hello, I have to write a comment about this with theses and examples. Do you have any ideas? Thank you so much !