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Writing the introduction to an essay
Subject : Which one is the major influence on our personality and development:
The characteristics we are born with, or any experiences we may have in our life.
My introduction:
It is quite irrefutable that individuals have their own properties which are born with. Some characteristics are concealed in genes, therefore people unwantedly inherit them. By contrast, there are great number of enviromental and cultural factors, which are considerable in terms of personality, character and attitude so that,both inherited and achieved characteristics could be involved the recognition that how one's personality could be made.
Any improvement or suggestion would be appreciated
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Writing essay, introduction
I am preparing for IELTS exam. Now I am practicing writing and firstly trying to write good introduction.
Subject : Advantages and disadvantages of working or travelling between finishing high school and starting university.
This is my introduction for the essay:
Students before attending courses at university need to be much more experienced than school period; because they are supposed to be more creative and accept more responsibilities. So, they are mostly persuaded to work or travel between secondary school and college. while youth, with no doubt, could learn many at work or on a trip, some disadvantages may be considered too.
Please correct the mistakes.
Any suggestions and improvements to gain more marks are appreciated.
Thank you in advance
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What is the meaning of "material" here:
These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways.
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what's the meaning of "Little did ..."
What's the meaning of "Little did I realize" here:
Little did I realize that they would use dirty tricks to try to frighten me into abandoning the cemetery, therefore losing my wager.
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