Could anyone help me correct my grammar mistakes? This is an IELTS writing practice. Thanks a lot if you write any comments. Question You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job Answer Dear Max, I am so delighted to tell you that I have got an offer from USC recently, and this means that we are going to meet soon! But I do need you to do me a favor if you don’t mind. I will move to Los Angeles this summer because my classes will start on the 20th of August. I will major in Computer Science which will help me to become an AI engineering after I graduated. The program is a two-year master’s degree program, so we can hang out often in the upcoming future. To assist in covering the cost of study and live in Los Angeles, I aim to find a part-time job. As I know, not only the tuition fees are expensive in USC, but also to rent an apartment in California is much more expensive than other states in the US. So, I would like to arrange some temporary employment before I arrived. I have a bachelor’s degree in computer science and I know you are working in this industry. I am wondering if you could ask around among your friends and colleagues to see if anyone would offer me an opportunity. I would be grateful if you could give me the contact details of the employer who would like to offer the job. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, John