would you please revise my writing ?? 1. South korea goverment had made an experiment in Nuclear weapon from 1970 to 1980's 2. Korean men have to participated in reserve forces for totally 8 years after finishing their regular army service that is about 2 years. 3. He has been objecting to the new policy of producing products which employee made before.

What's the correct answer ?? About time. 'From 12pm to 1pm' or 'From 12pm until 1pm' I mean This sentence: You can have lunch from 12pm ~ 1pm.

Would you revise my writing?? 1.The companies wants to know how students have abilities to cope with problems in working place. 2. So university students have to participate in lots of activities during school life. for example, voluntary services and teaching something for low-income families and participating the contest relative to our major or something. 3. Getting jobs in the world, It's getting hard in everywhere because of bad economy. 4. Highly competitive condition changes atmosphere of university life. Many students concentrate to get a good job after graduation.

Hello.~! I hope you to correct my writing.. Thank you so much. 1. Are you going to have them study English?? 2. I'll have my car fixed. 3. Where do you usually get resources of teaching English ?? 4. It's so hard to find a way to watch TV program for free. 5. Whatever you do, Our company will support the project in improving our production in China. 6. We've found the problem of running factories in China since we visited one of the factories in China. 7. Who would you like to be successful as~ 8. In western countries, Do you think Asian guys are popular in there? (It's not a question, Just please, correct writing if you could find some errors.). 9. I'm looking for a way to live in Scandinavian countries for the rest of my life. 10. I'm going to talk about Korean education next time. It would be so interesting to share it with other members together.

Hi~~ All poeple and Happy New year !! Thank you for revising my writing. I've been practising writing English without errors grammatically. Would you like to look through my writing ?? :) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 1. I'm certain of his decision to make better the background suggested by employee. 2. German's technic of making cars is ahead of other countries. 3. He's very knowledgeable in the field of managing lots of plants efficiently. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for your help...Have a nice day :)

Hi~ Members! Please revise my writing. 1. Teachers emphasized the importance of how to study efficiently. 2. I might not be able to send her this message. 3. We have to conserve our heritages for next generation. 4. I'm contemplating to buy ingredients of making Korean food. 5. The value of items made by myself was enhanced in the internet auction site among people.

This is a short essay. Please correct my essay~ When I visited India as a volunteer for 1 year, I met a Japanese woman who teach English in school, which was built by herself. First time when I was talking with her, I asked her : "Is there any special reason to choose India for teaching English 20year ago?? " Her answer makes me satisfied. It was wonderful so I've been respecting her.

Always thank you for revising my writing. :) [ Human is weak.. ] When we face difficult problems in our life, We should get over obstacles and have to think solutions. Yes! I was always striving to resolve my problems when I was depressed but these days, I don't know why I feel that I can't handle it very well. I'm being weak and I'm tired of all of things in my life..........I wasn't like that before. Just remember my honor of the past.... Yes!!! I must have to get over this time and It's time to restart all things without the glory of the past. Hope everything is going well soon...

Can you read this writing and Please correct my writing. Chu-seok is the second largest day in Korea. I'd like to introduce this day for foreigner friends. I'm not good at speaking English but I hope you enjoy this writing and know about Korean culture. Tomorrow is the Korean thanksgiving day. All korean families generally get together at the parents house or somewhere where they celebrate that day with great foods and nice talking with their families. At early in the morning, We should take time for ancestral rites with great foods such as fruits and meat and traditional Korean foods made by our family but Usually, women are preparing all foods so Some women complain their hard works in Chu-seok for serving visitors and making a lot of foods without help from their husband. But These days, Korean men help their sisters or wife when women're making foods and cleaning house. After taking time for ceremony in the morning, we visit our ancestor's graves to treat them with foods and to take care of its graves. I'd like to tell you a lot of things about this day what we do but I know we don't like to read long sentences :D If you come visit our country, you will enjoy lots of things Korean cultures. I hope you will do for your special experiences in Korean. Thank you for reading my practice writing. Have a nice day!! ^______________________________________^