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Improve public health
How to improve public health becomes a problem faced by us. In my opinion, although increasing the number of sport facilities contributes positively to good health and fitness in some extent, it is not the most effective method and other measures are necessarily needed.
Advocates of the increase in the sport facilities believe that it helps people to stay healthy. It is convenient for people who want to do some sports if the facilities is each-to-reach. In addition, facility is necessary for some physical activities.For example, playing basketball, which is a popular sport among young boys. Basketball player can not enjoy their game without basketball court.
On the other hand, I agree with those people who deny that increasing number of sport facilities is the best solution to health-related problem. The first reason is that the addition facilities just appear someone interesting in sports but not all people who need excises. In addition, there are several measures can be used to raise the level of public health. For example, High tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contribute to poor health.
On a conclusion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results.
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Museum
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People have different views about the role and function of the museum. In my opinion, the museum can and should be both entertaining and educational.
On the one hand, some people argue that the museum is a tourist attraction and its main aim is to entertain visitors. The visitor, especially those who go to the museum to unwind, may feel bored and tired if museum teaches so much.
On the other hand, other people argue that the museum should assume the responsibility of explaining knowledge behind the collections. They believe that most of people do not understand those collections completely and they need the assistant from the museum. The museum should take some steps to help visitors to understand collections better. For example, employ professional guides or put a detailed explanation around the collection.
On a conclusion, I believe entertainment and education play equally important role in building a good museum. Only when the museum has both characters, can visitors have fun and learn something at the same time.
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A family business (please give me some corrections! Thank you!)
I want to talk about a bookstore, which in the spitting distance of my high school. The bookstore is opened by a young couple who have a one year old child, so I think it’s a family business. I knew this bookstore when I was in high school. You know, my hometown is far away from my high school. It takes one hour driving to get to my school. So when I was in my fresh year of high school, I felt strange about everything around my school. One day, I went for a walk alone and this bookstore into my eyes. I have always been an avid reader, so I step in to check out what products it sells. When I came in the bookstore, I found there has a wide range of books, like novels, proses and bibliographies. And the bibliographies accounting for the largest proportion since the major customers of this bookstore are high school students who study nearby. I saw tons of students went here to pick up their fond bibliographies and stationeries. By the way, their stationery is various and cheap. I think it’s one of the reasons why this bookstore is so popular. Anyway, I think this bookstore is fantastic and I go to there on a regular basis.
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A complaint which I satisfied with the exam (please give me some corrections!)
A complaint which I am satisfied with the result
I would like to talk about an online shopping experience which about a desk. About a couple of months ago, I went home to enjoy my winter holiday. When I got into my room, I found my room has nothing but a bed. My ACCA exam is in the near future and I have to prepare the exam in the holiday. So I decided to buy a desk from the Taobao, the Chinese equivalent of eBay. Three days later, I received the package of desk. The package is intact, but when I opened the package, I found a board is broken. You know, the desk is needs to be assembled by myself and I can’t fix a perfect drawer without this board. I felt deflated and I complained to the customer service staff of the store from which I bought the desk. The staff is very warm-heart and listened to me patiently. She promised to mail me a new board and I finally received the package in a few days later. I am satisfied with the result of this complaint because the staff tries to help me settle the problem instead of escaping her responsibility and finally I have a perfect desk.
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A beautiful city (If you can help me correct the errors in this article,then thank you !
I am preparing the IELTS exam and the writing below is for speaking.
I’m going to talk about Xiamen, which is a picturesque city locates in the Fujian. I heard about the Xiamen since I was a young age because my hometown is Quanzhou which is close to Xiamen. For my family, it just needs one hour to get Xiamen. So, my parents go to the Xiamen pretty frequently. Every time when they get back, they share the traveling story with me and then I start to know Xiamen.
Xiamen and its surrounding countryside is known for its scenery and tree-lined beaches. And its most famous tourist attraction is Gulangyu, a former treaty port enclave, is a popular weekend getaway with views of the city and features many Victorian-style buildings. But because it’s popular, it is crowed as well since everyone regards it as the must-see attraction of the Xiamen. I remember vividly that the first time I go to the Xiamen, about ten years ago, one of my closest friends with I went to the Gulangyu to visit. But when we got there, the only thing we can see was people and the street was packed like sardines in the can.
Well, why I think of Xiamen is a beautiful city? As I said before, Xiamen has spectacular view and that is why I love is this city.
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