IELTS task 1 writing
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The given illustration depict information about the process of manufacturing bricks for the building industry. All in all, the process consist of various steps.
In the beginning, the earth is excavated by a digger machine in order to extract clay. Then the fine clay which is prepared by passing through the metal grid is mixed with sand and water in order to create the mixture. Next, the bricks are formed by pouring the aggregate into the mold or by a wire cutter machine. In the following step, the bricks are kept into an oven for few days under specific circumstances. First, they lose the moisture in the oven for one or two days. Then they are heated in few steps. The heating starts with 200 degrees of Celsius and continues up to 1300 degrees. Finally, the bricks are cooled down in the chamber for two or three days and in the end, they are ready for packing and delivering to the industries.