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Hello everybody...
I'm practicing my writing so I tryed to write a formal email. Someone can correct it ? Thanks in advance..
Dear...
I am writing you to information about the issue detected on credential cards. Ours technicals tryed to fix the issue but they can’t do it. So is necessary bring the printer to White Lion’s office to repair it and to do effective the guarantee
Tomorrow my partner is going your office with the Authorization. Is necessary you signed the Authorization to personal of security allows extract the printer.
I know the work can’t stop so I engaged send you another printer instead of it. You’ll get it Friday 22th.
Best regards.
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About Her (part I)
About Her..
I’ll write about Her. Last month on Independence Day, we travelled to Cajamarca - Peru. Cajamarca is where I was born. My family live there. So, She and me decided to visited my Mom, Dad, Sister and brother. We are living in Lima so I bought two tickets on Start Peru aero lines on 26th July. We had a brief trip (is just one hour).
In Cajamarca we took a taxi from airport to Mom’s house. My Mom was waiting us with breakfast, oh my Mom She is kind, pretty and little woman. We had not seen each other for 1 year ago so I took her in my arms and she kissed my cheek.
She was on my right smiling. I introduced Her to My Mom. She was continue smiling but I could see she was a bit nervousness. When I said, “She is my girlfriend…” My Mon changed her face… (to be continued)..
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Survive with my friends.
We then of dinner went sleep. Next day we woke up very early to go gather fruits to make breakfast; we got bananas, coconuts and berries enough for everyone. We made a delicious sweet breakfast. Sam didn’t like it because he prefers the saltly foods but it was the only thing that we found nearby. In the afternoon we’ll go to the river to fish and look for firewood to cook.
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Practicing writing email
Dear Richard.
I’m Jorge Incil, from Lima, Peru. I’m a system engineer.
I am writing about the advertisement for a Job in your company that I saw in “ABC news”. I’m interesting about it.
At the moment I working at White Lion S.A. It’s a company of Access Control Systems and I studding English at Britanico School. Five years ago I worked as Graphic Designer. I have attached my CV.
Mr. Richard I’ve question about the job. What’s the salary propose? Is in Dolars or Euros? Does company have flexible hours? Could I develop my skills about languages and IT systems?
I look hearing from you.
Best Regards.
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My essay... What do you think about it?
Taxes are important to country because through to these, country settle public spending that generate public needs.
One of taxes that State has got for to fund the spending generate by purpose fulfillment is Income Tax; so all taxpayers should achieve with his responsibility tax because, otherwise it will be requiring by coercion.
Despite aforementioned, there are some exceptions for responsibility tax, one of them is doesn’t affect Income Tax, it has got as characteristic releasing of responsibilities tax permanently, meaning it hasn’t got an established period of validity.
The income and profits generated by the assets, which support the technical reserves of the life insurance companies, constitute in the country for retirement pensions, invalidity and survival of the annuities coming from the Private System of Administration of Pension Funds, constituents an Income inflow to the Income Tax, that is what is established in Article 18 of the Income Tax Law.
And taking into account that insurance companies are entities that, according to The General Law of the Financial System and the Insurance and Organic System of the Superintendence of Banking and Insurance, must be constituted as corporations, therefore, they receive income considered as income third category.
It is considered then that there is a part of the income of the insurance companies that does not configure, for our legislator, as a taxable event, susceptible of being demanded as a tax obligation.
Faced with this perspective, the present investigation seeks to respond to the fact that such doesn’t affect is due, because part of the income considered as income or benefit for insurance companies, is infected.
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One trip
Let me tell you about my trip. It was one month ago. I travelled to Cajamarca by plane. I went to visit muy family.
The travel was well but there was some problems. First my fly was delayed, second the traffic in Cajamarca was terrible. I lost breakfast with my family. Another problem was the taxi. It was very expensive in Lima. I had to pay 70 PEN.
The first day my father and me saw Peru vs Dinamarca football match.we enjoyed it. The second day my family and me had a great Father's day. They was happy very happy.
Finally, I travelled back go Lima. It hasn't got problems. It was quickly and some conmfortable.
In my opinion, I enjoyed this trip.
Regards.
Please, can someone correct the text above.
I await your comments.
Thanks.
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My last holidays
On my last holiday I went to Huancayo, two years ago, with my Friends. We stayed three days in a Hotel. In the first day, we went go city tour and go to lagoon “Paca”.
In the second day we visited to “Convento de Ocopa”, in this place we saw artistic paintics, animal museum and natural beautiful places. At the night, we ate a local dish.
Finally, in the third day we went to “Huaytapallana”, the highest mountain of Huancayo. We could saw three lagoon in the way.
This experience was incredible because we walked more three hours to get to the last lagoon below the snowy. At the night we return to our Hotel, we were cold.
The Huancayo’s weather is cold and all days of holiday was cold, but I really liked those holiday.
Please, can someone correct the text above.
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Practicing writing
"You ask me do you if still I think about you. ¿Do you believe?. You are right, and, maybe I miss you. I don't how explain to detail. I think about you but maybe not how you imagine. No. I think about you sporadically, when the silence and peace approach me and there are an inexplicable tranquillity in surroundings, is when you come on my memorie with soft wish to have you by my side. But it desappeare when i remember that your chose be far of me. And, I only remember those moments when all seemed to be eternal, when I did not suppose the end.Although you maybe had it planned. Later, a little pause, around me all is stop and the sudden silence appears.
I close my eyes, I understand that I have only one option: wish you the best. I finish think about you with a slight sigh, and little smile of satisfaction to know that I was not me who disappointed. The pause ends and life continius".
Please, can someone correct the text above.
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Thanks.
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Memories
My names is Jorge. I'm want learn English. Please, can someone to correct the text below:
"Memories. Are like a trailer of past, pictures that pass one over other, with the silence like soundtrack that ends whit a sigh for some sadness of the past or some pleasant memorie that I desire again to relive it ..."
I wait yours coments.
Thanks.
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