Can somebody please check my Japanese speech?
I have a speech in my Japanese class tomorrow so I was wondering if people could please, very kindly check over it for me and correct any mistakes I've made. I'm at intermediate level, Genki II.
私のゆめのしごとはジェットプログラムはこくさいかんけいのコーディネーターをはたらきます。それは日本になります。私はもうしこむのそつぎょうのにしんせいします。アプリケーションは十月にはらきます。私はたのしいとおもうのでここではたらきます。だから、私のかいてきゾーンから私をひきはなし、よいがくしゅうけいけんになります。
My dream job for after I graduate university is to work as a Co-ordinator of International Relations for the JET Programme. It will be based in Japan. I will apply when applications open. Applications will open in October. I want to work here because it sounds fun. However, I also think it will be a good learning experience and get me out of my comfort zone.
NOTE: Hiragana words that should be in kanji is for kanji I do not know yet.
ありがとうございます!