I’d like to help anyone with Basic English :)

Leave feedback please! Hello, I'm planning on becoming a community tutor, but I want to put a little twist in it. My classes will be either online using skype or any media you're comfortable with. I will also do messaging and voice messaging classes for those camera shy people or for those who don't have a working camera to video chat. My classes will be pure English language and the twist is, since I am young and Currently a college student pursuing my degree for Education, I will teach you guys the basics of course but I also will be teaching you "Slang" and will be showing you different places in New York City. I will keep you updated on New York language and its difference from "slang". I will also teach you safety when visiting NYC and a lot of diverse topics etc. My class will be more deeper than the regular classes but It will concern a lot of New vocabularys and videos of NYC, I want to teach but I want you guys to be able to visualy see and learn.

Make a comment if its a good idea, thank you :)

For English learners I am native in English, This is a test question for ENGLISH learners. I just wanted to evaluate who can spot mistakes in sentences. 1) "They're eyes are hazel brown." Is this statement correct as it is or does it need to be fixed? 2) "Today at the mall i bought a purse." Is this statement correct as it is or does it need to be fixed? 3) "She was young, beautiful, kind, and intelligent." Is this statement correct as it is or does it need to be fixed? If it needs to be fixed comment below, I'm curious to see.