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IELTS Writing Task 1. #2
The line graph below demonstrate the weight of fruits grown up by a farm and amount of fertilizer used during 2013. The bar chart represents the quantity of monthly precipitation in millimetres.
On the first graph we can see that the lowest amount of produced fruits was estimated during winter months and didn’t rise higher that level of 2.5 tonnes. After February the quantity of the produced fruits was constantly growing and reached a peak at over 4 tonnes in August. The amount of fertilizer used in 2013 fluctuated between 0 in June and almost 1 tone in March.
On the second graph it can be seen that the largest volume of rainfall was in February and picked at 16 millimetres. The lowest quantity of precipitations was during July, August and September. But in October the volume of rainfall encreased markedly to about 11 millimetres. Comparing two graphs it should be pointed that there were the opposite trends between weight of produced fruits, the amount of used fertilizer and the amount of precipitations. Thus, since March till September the usage of fertilizer was low and the volume of rainfalls was decreasing. In contrast, the quantity of fruits showed sighnificant growth.
Overall, not in each month of the 2013 there was a direct connection between three analyzed indicators.
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IELTS Writing Task 2. #1
There is a common thought that a person's intelligence depends on parents. On the other hand, people say that an environment mostly influences on persons smartness.
Undoubhtadly, a human spends a lot of time with family during the long period of time. Since our childhood parents choose the tools and ways to improve our skills and understanding of the world. Forexample, they can buy for us different developing games or can manage our leisure time by giving us an opportunity to be enrolled in a sports club or music school. Another key point for the view of parents influence is the DNA. We borrow the strongest genetic features from our mom and dad, including the smartness. For instance, talented people who become famouse mostly have talented children.
There are some arguments for the other point of view. It is obvious, that a human beeing always tries to be a part of a group, so he or she copies the characteristics of the referent group of people. For example, in most cases bad pupils try to do their best in a class of successful pupils. Our friends, coleagues, teachers can encourage us on beeing better then we are now. Besides, school and the corporate laws put some restrictions,making us more skillful, intelligent and aim-oriented.
To my mind, the main factor which influences on intelligence is the self-motivation. It means that if the person whants to achieve big goals he or she will use each opportunity to be better and to make one more step in the self-development.
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IELTS Writing Task 1. #1
The following graph and the table illustrate the dynamics of three main estimations: the quantity of the annual oil consumption, the amount of employees in oil industry and the unemployment rate in a particular country during the period of 1950-2010.
On the first chart the rate of oil consumption in millions of barrels is represented. The lowest rate was pointed in 1970 (about 19) and the highest one was estimated in 2010 (more than 50). The level of consumption in 1950 was a bit higher than in 1970. As it can be seen, since this year the numbers are constantly growing.
From the second chart we can see that numbers can be devided into two groups. The first one refers to the period from 1950 till 1970. In this time laps the quantity of people employed in oil industry and the unemployment rate have not markable volatility and diverse not much from 1000 and 4% respectively. The second group of numbers demonstrates two contaversal trends. In particular, the amount of employees is increasing (from 1800 people in 1980 to 3100 in 2010), meanwhile, the level of unemployment is rapidly going down (from 3.1% to 1.6%). Comparing chart A and chart B it must be pointed that as the consumption of oil grew the quantity of people employed in oil industry also increased.
To sum up, the line graph and the table represent the tendencies in oil industry between 1950 and 2010.
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