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Can you please check my essay? Thank you in advance! The book is very popular nowadays in my country. When I visit famous bookstores and online book markets, the book has been stood in front of me. Finally, I bought it and read. If we divided the book by 3 parts, I could say that first part is excited. Middle part is annoyed and finally last part is frustration. In the first part, the idea was interesting and the situation the characters fell in was unexpected. As a reader, I always wonder that if I were them, how I can live under such circumstances. Under quarantine condition, the book shows us the magic of statistical science truth. Because in this small colony, you can find each level of people who intend to become bad/or good. We are living similar situations on the World but the story in the book is exaggeration. As people, we love, we get killed, we suffer from famine, we support each other, we fight, we learn, we sacrifice, we violence… The difference between the story and life is that if everyone gets blind, the amount of wickedness will be increased by people. Because most of them believe that if no one see them, they can do everything. Also, we can better understand the value of each kindness. When I come to final part of book, I expected to see what people will react. However, author prefers to make readers write a result on their owns. Because the characters in the book are us. I thought about my feeling, my attitudes towards all things and how human being become dangerous under such circumstances. I could not write a positive end for my story.
February 18, 2021
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The book is very popular nowadays in my country. When I visit famous bookstores and online book markets, the book has been stood in front of me. Finally, I bought it and read. If we divided the book by 3 parts, I could say that first part is excited. Middle part is annoyed and finally last part is frustration. In the first part, the idea was interesting and the situation the characters fell in was unexpected. As a reader, I always wonder that if I were them, how I can live under such circumstances. Under quarantine condition, the book shows us the magic of statistical science truth. Because in this small colony, you can find each level of people who intend to become bad/or good. We are living similar situations on the World but the story in the book is exaggeration. As people, we love, we get killed, we suffer from famine, we support each other, we fight, we learn, we sacrifice, we violence… The difference between the story and life is that if everyone gets blind, the amount of wickedness will be increased by people. Because most of them believe that if no one see them, they can do everything. Also, we can better understand the value of each kindness. When I come to final part of book, I expected to see what people will react. However, author prefers to make readers write a result on their owns. Because the characters in the book are us. I thought about my feeling, my attitudes towards all things and how human being become dangerous under such circumstances. I could not write a positive end for my story.
February 14, 2021
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Dear Sindy, I am happy to hear from you that you will move to my city in next month. As you know that I am living in that city more than 5 years and I am looking forward to sharing my experiences with you. Living in this city is exciting because there are a lot of outdoor sport activities in there. For example, a huge ice-sky plate in middle of the city is totally free. Also, you can attend city sport clubs and take free lessons. Indeed, you can improve your skills on different activities. As you can imagine that this city is not small enough that you can access to everywhere by bike. That is why you will have to use public transportation, especially railways. Railways are separated to all around the city centers and it is cheaper ways to travel from one place to another. Additionally, some city bus transportation can be another option, but they are useful only you want to travel on biggest streets. If you need to meet new people, you should drop in Mayorca Street. There are a lot of bars, restaurants, caffees and social clubs. This street is heart of the city and alive 24 hours in a day. I am looking forward you move here. Lots of love,
January 3, 2021
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Could you please check & correct the sentence below? I am not sure the sentences is totally correct Also, I added “SBU List” sheet to follow current responsible person on CINA. Could you please make all invoices are approved according to list and inform me about new responsible person if necessary?
September 2, 2018
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Could you please give some recommendation for better sentences The book is very well known throughout the World. I had heard so many comments about it before buying the book. When I started reading it, I understand the meaning of interests towards it. Because, this book is not a book which supports readers with ordinary personal development training, but also it can be a great guide for all of us. Therefore, people should not throw it an edge. On the contrary, they should read again and again this book in a determinate time period. Because, you can easily notice that, the book will give you new significant feeds for your mind. You will never feel that you are reading a same book at each time. This feature makes it magical and inspiring in people’s minds. Author puts forward an ambitious idea that everyone can be a person who is they want to be. But, there is just a one condition they must believe their desires. The author illustrates special steps. Although he uses soft language, he doesn’t give directly the main idea and bridges of all parts in the book. He believes readers should think and internalize each step in detail. Because of this aim, he would choose mostly cloudy expression. This book has a huge impact on me. I really decided great chances in my life and my mind. Also, I saw that all the comments I had heard are not exaggeration. If you are believing the power of the intense energy of a person, you will be great and special directions in this book. Good Reading!
January 19, 2018
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Argentine Tango I have met with Argentine Tango one time period of my life. I had already been dancing Social Latin for 3 years when I decided to learn the special dance, Argentine Tango! But I have to confess that Argentine Tango fascinated me more than Salsa. That is why I want to talk about some Argentine Tango. Argentine Tango originates from Buenos Aires in late 1800s. Poor Argentinian immigrants created this type of dance in these years. Because of this reason, the dance is known as a social dance through worldwide. Indeed, Argentine Tango was born a beautiful child of waltz, polka and habanera. The Tango dance has different features of these dance types. By the way, Argentine Tango was declared as a world heritage by UNESCO in 2009. People can dance with Argentine Tango style at ‘Milangos’. Milango means ‘party’, ‘fiesta’ or ‘special meeting plate’. Milango music is cheerful and exciting. You can get positive energy from the music that just listen it. In addition, the main instrument of the tango music is bandoneon. Argentine tango dancers have a deep connection with the music and their partners. Because, there are no verbal signals or particular dance rules. Partners should feel the dance, music, milango atmosphere and the most important of all each other’s energy. Thus, they can dance in a harmony. Therefore, Tango is often described as a conversation without words. There is no communication way without feeling. Partners are responding to one another's expressive interpretation through the connection of their bodies. If you have any chance to learn this special dance, you should open the doors of your feelings for your dance partners and soul of the Argentine Tango. Because, the dance will surely make your lives cheerful and exciting like Milango Music!
December 23, 2017
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Tell Me about a Book Every people meet at least a special and powerful book which affects on their lives. I can easily say that I am very lucky about that, because I have met a lot of the books more than one times. These books make me brave to change various aspects of my life positively. Also, these books help me realizing great important and valuable points of the life. That is why I decided writing something about these books in my blog. The first book ,”The Story of My Experiments With Truth” was written by Mahatma Gandhi. Gandhi strats his story with an explanation. He express that his story had been written purely. Because of this reason, everyone can infers various comments and lessons from his experiences. Gandhi aims to guide people who seek for all virtuous ways in their lives. He express his perspective towards injustice circumstances. He always uses power of belief pand compassion as guns in his justice war. I affected the Gandhi’s patience and perspectives in his justice war. His some attitude fall me in shock, some situations in the book made me sad. Indeed, I could not believe some part of the story because, all those situations happenned and Gandhi was successful in his war without any gun and violence. I dived into deep thoughts when I finished the last sentence of the book. In my opinion, each people has been sent to World with a particular and special mission. This mission is only complated with patience and believes. A positive mind and stability can be other guns agains to difficulties in our lives. Today, we face various difficulties and challenges. We are always complaining because of them. Indeed, people should focus on voice of their heart and they shoud find their mission of being in the World like Gandhi. Then, they should learn using full of their power for their aims effectively. I believe that all these effort wil make us happy and peaceful in rest of our lives. Thank you Gandhi for giving me a new mindset’s key.
December 8, 2017
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