Do me a favor, please...... please revise the essay posted below... thanks a million... I don’t know much about the music, but the song” let it be” from Beatles deeply impressed me, when the first time I heard it. The life is filled with happiness and something let us down, however when we face the challenges which cannot overcome and sadness hard to go through what we should do is just let it be. The song makes me more tolerant to adversity and distress. In other words, the song made me tolerant and the tolerance made me stronger. please revise the essay posted below ：posted------post

how to use the "...which is a plus"