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The great changes of the younger generation<o:p></o:p>

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Good morning/afternoon, everyone.<o:p></o:p>

Well, today the topic I’m going to deal with is The great changes of the younger generation. <o:p></o:p>

Before we get to the point, I want to show you a little story. A few days ago, I was chatting with my father on the Internet, when I gave a cry of tears, he was surprised to ask me why I was crying. And I didn’t know how to explain. Through this story, I realized that the way young people communicate is different from before. Except this, the younger generation is taking a big change.<o:p></o:p>

  After all these years of rapid development, the younger generation has changed politically, economically and culturally.<o:p></o:p>

In politics, the educational system of the country is constantly improving, the cultural standards of the younger generation have generally improved, the system of encouraging entrepreneurship in the country has made more and more young people start their own businesses. (examples, data) <o:p></o:p>

In economic terms, the internet and AI became the mainstream of the younger generation, electronic commerce is becoming more and more developed. (examples)<o:p></o:p>

In the cultural context, young people's way of entertaining is very different from the past. There are a lot of reality shows on TV to cater to the tastes of young people. And they prefer to post interesting things in their lives on a web platform. They also post their own recorded videos or their own songs on it. (analogy)<o:p></o:p>

Comprehensive above three aspects, the younger generation is moving in the right direction, their lives are becoming more and more diverse. And I believe they will be better off in the future through their own innovation.<o:p></o:p>

That’s all, thank you.<a name="_GoBack"></a><o:p></o:p>