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Oct. 29th
I woke up in the morning and did a dictation practice by using a podcast and song. I chose a song called “Steal My Girl” by One Direction.
After that, I would try to go out and walk to the supermarket, but It was raining and black cloud was moving over my head. So I couldn’t. Instead, I could spend a good time watching Youtube videos and listening to interesting stories. It’s a quite indoor activity, but I wanted to go outside. You like sunny too? So I hope tomorrow must be sunny.
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I ask for checking my writing.
My teacher said that if you stuck one method and feel boring, you can change the material. You don’t have to do the same tool in long time. You can change it. You will be more fun of learning.
I taught that the successful learners know how to enjoy the learning process. They know how to make them playful.
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Hello everyone,
how are you today? I hope you correct my English.
A) I always go to supermarket at noon.
B) I like to stay up late at midnight.
C) My favorite animation is broadcasting at midnight.
D) I met him for the first time, I thought he was younger than me.
E) Fill in the date in the box.
F) I go to a church every weekend.
G) How many months are you keeping your workout?
H) This is 3 years from I have started knitting.
I) I have a plan to make this cardigan for my baby in the future.
I wait for your comment. Thanks.
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Hello everyone,
Thank you all correction for my last writing! I appreciate it.
Today, I will try to use a “stand”in sentence. I hope you involve me.
A) I will stand by you because we’re friends.
B) Her P.E ability stands out -. ( I could not last after “stands out”)
C) I stand up for the knitting designer because her works are beautiful.
D) I stand up for her even if she faces the difficulties like a divorce.
E) He quitted a job. I stand in his shoes, and understand how he feels at workplace.
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Hello everyone.
I would appreciate it that you would rectify my writing.
A) We laughed at a movie scene.
B) She cried when I listened to her stories.
C) “Back” she shouted.
D) She shouted her children that you shouldn’t follow unfamiliar person.
E) I wish Noto people recover from the earthquake.
F) I promise her that I will graduate university next year.
G) Let me sleep at 11:30 p.m.
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Hi,
I need your support. Can you correct my English writings?
•she is the most successful student in my class.
• I like to explore in the library.
• she asked me a question about knitting techniques.
• This is the word I try to understand in English.
• We are learning about a weather at science class.
• I’m not good at mathematics.
• Knitting needs mathematics knowledge.
I appreciate your suggestion. I don’t care how many corrections you have.
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Hello everyone, I ask for a correction of my writing.
How to use Elicit, Apprehend
•My question was able to elicit information from the designer.
•This book elicit good response from the reader.
•He was apprehended because of stealing the merchandise.
•The police apprehended the man responsible for breaking the law.
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Tokyo Station Anniversary Card
Got this card from my mother. This special *designed card or design (card) is for 100 year anniversary of Tokyo station! I enjoy to go to work and go home with this card *because you remind me of something old Japan that I never experienced (or I can imagine good old days), and it is a good feeling for me. You are nostalgic in my eyes.
March 30, 2018
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These days
As I have written the entry before, I am reading “A bear called Paddington Bear”. To tell the truth, this is for the first time to reading this book. Of course I have known the Paddington Bear because he is famous in Japan, too. However, I have missed the chance to read it. I realize that this story is interesting and it has rather a great sense of humor. I appreciate what Michael Bond has written this book and what he created so charming bear. I am happy to be able to understand amlost what they are talking in the story.
A recent weather is good, but a large amount of Sugi Kafun ( Japanese tree pollen) is bad for me. It is enough to make my nose, throat, and my eyes feel very itchy. ( I remember the news reporter’s saying that their amount is the largest ever because they have been saying every year, so it’s questionable if it is true.) Except this, It is warm and comfortable to spend the day. I expect to see this year’s Sakura with my friends : )
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