Could you correct my book report ? Title : The Big Egg Setting : At the shed, at the fence Characters : Mum, dad and their children Start of the story : The children was looking for eggs and putting them in a box in their shed. Dad had an idea and he put a big egg on hen’s nest Middle of the story: The children found a big egg. They thought that the egg was too big for their hen. End of the story : Dad showed ostriches to their children in the fence. My favorite part of the story is where Kipper found a big egg. My opinion : Dad was funny when he put the big egg on hen’s nest. I think he made a small plan to make children laugh. Thank you for correcting my book report in advance. and I have a question for the word I used in my report. I'm not sure about " shed and fence" Is there any exact expression about hen's and ostrich's place ? In the story, hens were in a small building that is used for storing things such as garden tools. and ostriches were in the fence. The family was raising the animals at the place next to their house.

Could you correct my book report ? Title : The Duck Race Setting : At the stream Characters : Mum and children Beginning story : Mum had an idea. The children made six ducks. Mum began the race. Middle story : Mum's duck sank. Chip's duck got stuck in the reeds. Biff's duck got stuck in the weeds and Wilf's duck got stuck on a log. End story : Two swans landed on the ducks and six ducks got soggy. My favorite part of the story is that the ducks went down the stream. My opinion : I think mom and children had a fun even though all ducks got in trobule.

Could you tell me what meaning of the sentence ? I'm reading a story book but I don't understand "Shiver me timbers!" in the story. Could you tell me the meaning? This is a part of the story. Ding-dong ! Pete thought fast. "There is loot in the kitchen." "Shiver me timbers! Why didn;t you say so?" Pirate Mom ran out of the room.

Could you correct my book report ? Book Report Title : Pirate Mom Characters : Pete, Pete’s mom, Amazing Marco Setting : At Pete’s home, At the magic show, At the hospital Problem : Pete’s mom turned into a pirate. Solution : Pete asked Amazing Marco to help his mom back again. Summary : Pete’s mom gave tickets to Pete for a magic show as a surprise so they went to the show. When It was time for Hypno-Trance magic, The Amazing Marco picked Pete’s mom and turned her into a pirate. but he ran off the stage in a hurry when he heard that his wife was having the baby. Pete’s mom was still a pirate. The Amazing Marco’s helper Zelda told Pete that the magic spell would wear off most of the time. Pete’s mom acted like a pirate. Pete was worried his mom so he went to find The Amazing Marco to the hospital. He said sorry to Pete and he turned his mom back again and Pete’s mom woke up. The next day, Pete got a letter from the Amazing Marco. He sent the letter because he felt sorry about Pete’s mom and also there were two bits of paper in the envelope. They were tickets for The Amazing Marco’s next show. Pete’s mom said “Oh, no”. My opinion : I think Pete was a prankster but he behaved responsibly. He wanted his mom to be a pirate because he liked playing pirates. but he realized that his mom had a problem. He tried to find a way to solve. It was really funny when Pete’s mom was frightened by the letter from the magician.

Could you correct my report ? Clean coins with vinegar what you need : Three dull 10 won (Korean currency), vinegar, salt, cup, paper towel Step1 Pour the vinegar into a cup and add the salt. Step 2 Stir it up Step3 Put 3 coins into the cup and count to 10 slowly. Step 4 Take out the coins and rinse them in water. Step 5 Rub them with a paper towel. How does it work? The acid in the vinegar reacts with salt to remove copper oxide which was making 10 won dull. That’s why you could make the coins shiny.

Could you correct my report ? Pyramid Gift Box What you need : Colored construction paper, Ribbon or cord, Scissors, Template, Hole punch, Chocolates Step 1 Place the template on the colored construction paper and trace the outline. Step 2 Cut it out Step3 Fold the template according to the folding lines. Step4 Punch a hole on each of the 4 tips. Step 5 Place the Chocolates inside. Step 6 Thread the ribbon or cord through the 4 holes. Step7 Tie a box to close the box.

Could you correct my report ? Science Report Bouncing Bubbles What you need : Water, Dish soap, Glycerin, Straw Step1 Pour some water and glycerin into a cup Step2 Stir to combine. Step3 Put on the glove or the sock Step4 Blow a bubble. Step5 Try holding the bubble and bouncing it.

Which is correct sentence? Which is correct sentence? or are both correct sentence? 1. My birthday is May 9. 2. My birthday is on May 9.

could you correct my sentence? 1. Mixing glycerin with dish soap and water makes the bubble extra strong so the bubble doesn't pop easily and they can bounce. 2. Put on the glove or a sock.