Please check my essay about September 1: When I was a child, I wasn't pleased about September 1. I didn't like kindergarten, then I didn't like school, after that I didn't like university. I have been studying at the university for ten years just because my parents wanted it and I wasn't brave to argue or choose my own way. I didn't even know what my way was, I wasn't able to listen to my own voice. At long last I found out what kind of work would make me happy. I was made of stronger stuff than anyone seemed to think, I didn't give up and began to open my own universe step by step. What things make me happy? What I am sad about? What I love and what I hate? Lots of questions according to an wide area of developing myself. I have to admit that I had such an eventful life before, but after I found out what does mean to find a world that I belong to - it is incredible.

I bet Harry, Ron and Hermione were looking forward to starting the third year at Hogwarts. Though their feelings about it were different. I reckon Harry was glad to come back to the wizarding world. He has been growing up with pretty unfriendly non-magical relatives and he didn't want to miss the opportunity to contact the people he really loves. He was plunged into a fabulous dream when he found out he was a wizard. Even with Sirius Black on the loose he didn't hesitate to go straight to the school. Ron haven't known other communities, so school was quite obvious and casual thing. I consider he would be thunderstruck if he knew how much Harry wanted to come back to Hogwarts. Ron saw learning from the wizarding point of view - it was tough and sometimes boring. Hermione couldn't wait to discover new things. She's grew up in a non-magical family, as Harry, but she was a perfectly prepared young witch because of her love to studies. They catch a special train on the first of September and it was hard to find any empty compartment in the carriage - it means that lots of students had began their new magical year. They were not to be fooled by sarcastic comments that magic does not exist. They were not going to take any crap from Muggles, who will go to any lengths to ignore magic, even if it’s staring them in the face.

Please correct my essay about Harry Potter) Before third year at Hogwarts students needed to buy lots of things. Fortunately, they could found all of them in one place - Diagone Alley - the long cobbled street that was packed with the most fascinating wizarding shops in the world. First of all, Harry replenished his store of potions in the Apothecary. Then he bought new robes in Madam Malkin's Robes for All Occasions. Finally he went to the Flourish and Blotts to buy his new schoolbooks for two new subjects - Care of Magical Creatures and Divination. The Monster Book of Monsters was listed as the required book for Care of Magical Creatures, but he had already got one - Hagrid sent it to him as a birthday present. For Divination he took Unfogging the Future by Cassandra Vablatsky. Ron bought set of books exactly as Harry's and a new wand, because his previous one had snapped accidentally last year. He also found a rat tonic for Scrabbers the rat in a magical creature shop - Magical Menagerie. Scrabbers looked thinner than usual after the travels in Egypt. Hermione took more new subjects, so she bought books for Arithmancy, Care of Magical Creatures, Divination, the Study of Ancient Runes and Muggle Studies. She was intented to buy an owl as an early birthday present in the Magical Menagerie, but when she went in she met a ginger cat and decided to have him instead of an owl. In my opinion, the Magical Menagerie is the most wonderful shop in Diagon Alley. I would like to buy a magical creature, I have always wanted to have a pet. Very likely I would buy a cat, I adore cats of every shape and colour. Honestly, I believe that it is impossible to buy a pet, we just can meet each other. If we like one another and I notice it clearly, I'll buy a cat no matter what powers does it have.

An essay about one of the characters of the Harry Potter book There are a lot of phrases tell us that there is no point to predict a person's behaviour according to their clothes or appearance. For example – 'Clothes do not make the men', or 'It is not the gay coat that makes the gentelmen'. Although sometimes we do see bring features that allow to create the full impression about someone. I would like to share my thoughts about Harry's Aunt Marge. She was Uncle Vernon’s sister, which means she was not a blood relative of Harry’s, whose mother had been Aunt Petunia’s sister. Despite that fact Harry had been forced to call her “Aunt” all his life. Aunt Marge bred bulldogs and obviously she had a lot of things in common with her dogs – large jaw, shovel-like hands, tiny bloodshot eyes. She was also very like Uncle Vernon: large, beefy, and purple-faced. She even had a mustache, though not as bushy as his. Reading about her appearance is quite tense and anxious, I feel sort of dangerous from it. It is true, that offensive and even violence behaviour was Aunt Marge's casual attitude. She was strict and rude with anyone who had different interests or values. I think being different was innappropriate for her and that's what I saw immediately.

Guys, please check my essay about Harry Potter Harry Potter was highly unusual boy because of the many reasons. He was a wizard and grew up completely ignoring it. Although he lost his parents and has been living with quite unfriendly relatives - his dead mom's sister brought him up - he stayed kind and generous. He met his thirteenth birthday without any proper present, even a birthday cart. But this year was different. His best friends, Ron and Hermione, found the way to send him something very warmth and valuable. Ron sent him a Pocket Sneackoscope from his Egypt traveling, it was what looked like a miniature glass spinning top. If there is something unworthy around the owner, it's supposed to light up and spin. Hermione presented Harry a Broomstick Service Kit, which was very nice - Harry was a huge fan of Quidditch and played for the House team. There was another gift from Hogwarts gamekeeper Hagrid - the Monster book of Monsters. And there were also three birthday cards with touching wishes. In my opinion, the most useful present was from Hermione. It is nessessary for the professional player to maintain the quality of the equipment. If I were a friend of Harry, I would present him a birthday cake. I believe that it creates a holiday cheer.

An essay about Harry Potter and how I decided to read the book. Please correct my mistakes When I was a child I found the story about Harry Potter very irksome. I was a picky girl, so the meeting started when I had found the second part on the street last year. I thought 'well, at least it might help to improve my English, I can try'. Although I didn't know the plot, I've started to read the book. How was I amazed, when I found out that there was a reading club where people was about to read exactly the same book. The whole story had begun there. We spent three incredible months together - we were all in the same boat - lovely book and a language that was a passion of ours. Each week new collocations, creative tasks like essays or talking to native speakers about Harry and even cooking dishes from the book. I thought that I won't last long, but it is my last creative task - to write the essay. I feel sad and satisfied at the same time. I remember all the days when I sat reading the book with my tongue poking out. How was I amazed when I remembered that I had watched the film for about twenty years ago. A friend of mine, who was a fan of the HP, asked me to go with her to the cinema. I was utterly bewildered, when I matched my childhood and my present. I assumed that neither the past, nor the present could be much more close to each other, that I feel it now. If I were a magic pixie, I couldn't create the better sigh - our past is valuable and count, although sometimes we don't remember it.

Please, correct my mistakes I have a task to make five sentences for each theme - "Past Perfect", "Conditional", "Either, neither, nor... nor". 1. After we had moved, I said indignantly that it is not fair - anything doesn't work in our new flat. 2. Harry had warned about the plot, but he didn't pass up the chance to return to Hogwarts. 3. I got gingerly to my feet after I had fallen down from the scooter. 4. I had come home when I realized that I forgot my bag at the café, so I ambled out to pick it up. 5. We had moved when I noticed that it was a terrible ordeal for me. 1. If our new flat was starting to grow on me, I would eat my words. 2. If you pour your soul to someone, you have the tight connection with them. 3. If I were a magic pixie, I would find the way from all dead ends because of my superpower. 4. If something hurts me, I won't cover it - all my aspect will tell the truth. 5. If I knew I a though more about myself, my life would be happier. 1. Neither of my parents couldn't understand me when I was a teenager. 2. During my life I had two pets - a dog and a cat; francly, either of them were incredible. 3. Harry thought that nor the Sorting Hat, nor Fawks could help him, but he was wrong. 4. Harry reconed that he won't last long, but at last had the phoenix and the hat - either of them were the signs that he's not alone. 5. Nor tasty food, nor tight embrace could console me after the moving - it was a disaster.

Correct my essay about Harry Potter, please The task is to choose a picture and describe what we see there. There is a picture that shows the main scene from the seventeenth chapter of the Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets book. In this chapter Harry found out where the entrance to the Chamber of Secrets is and met Lord Voldemort there. Fortunately, it was not Voldemort himself. It was just a memory preserved into the diary that Tom Riddle left when he finished Hogwarts. Ginny helped Tom with his dreadful deeds - she had spilled all her secrets to the diary. Finally Tom was powerful enough to go out from the book although he was still a memory. I suppose, Tom was sure this is his very triumphant moment. So there is the end of the dimly lit Chamber. It is dull and grimly. Harry's just finished the battle with the Basilisk - it layes down motionless on the right of the picture and its eye sockets are bleeding. Fawks the phoenix is soaring around on the left of the picture, he is bright and golden crimson. We can also see a gleaming silver sword on the right, it appeared when Dumbledore had sent Fawks and the Sorting Hat before the battle started. Harry thought that neither of them would be much good in a duel, but he was wrong. Fawks punctured mortal yellow Basilisks eyes, the Sorting Hat gave Harry the sword so he could kill the serpent. One of the poisonous fang hurt Harry but Fawks healed his wound. In all likelihood, Harry's beliefs helped him again - only the true loyalty could call Fawks to him. Love and friendship is more valuable than something else in the world. Harry knew it well, his mother died to save him. In this exact moment that we see the phoenix throw the diary to Harry. Neither Tom nor Harry didn't expect it and Harry plunged Basilisk's fang straight into the heart of the book. We see on the picture how ink spurts out of the diary flooding the floor. This is the end of the great battle.