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how to use "as same as" correctly?
1 We'll maintain the temperature as same as the tank.
2 We'll maintain the temperature as same as the level of the tank.
Which sentence is right? How shoul I modify the first one? Why?
thank you so much.
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guess the name of an island
I am about to write a short composition. Please help me modify it at which I mistake. Meanwhile, guess a place as I described.
This beautiful island locates in the center of Mediterranean in Italy. I found it appeared a few times in the different movies.
BC. 1000 years, the Greek controlled it. Then the Roman beat away them and got the island.
In one of the famous movie that called "Cinema Paradise" you could not fail to feel the beauty of it.
Perhaps, you are so young that you have not seen the old movie. But you must have been watched the Aquaman that included many viewpoints from this island.
So what is the name of it?
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A tragic story
Yesterday I watched an Indian film "Masaan".It reflects quite a few questions in society in India.
Caste system is an obvious problem which comes from the last century. A guy in this movie likes his classmate who is from the higher level system. She is not only a beautiful,but a sprightly girl.After the guy chases her with his humor and honest,the girl answers to be his girl friend.But soon after,they face the big problem that they belong to different levels. The parents of girl could not agree with the boy because he was born from an ordinary family. His father,his uncle and his brother all go in for masaan job. They live near to the Ganges River.
When the boy is in the frustrated mood, the girl stimulates him if only he can educate from the college and find a good job she'll persuade her parents or go out with him.
The girl sets out the journey to pilgrimage after completing the dial. Therefore the boy is very happy and decides to finish his paper for education very well.
One night his brother lets him help on the masaan because there are many people who died of the accident.When he arrives he finds the dead were from the bus to pilgrimage.His lovely girlfriend was also on this bus.
He puts up with his inner misery.He sits on the bank of Ganges River all night.He can't stop missing her.He could have been broken the system,but in the end he fails.
What a pity! I think the director wants to tell us we are not able to break through the rule even if death.
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How can I improve the chance to make people correct my articles?
How can I improve the chance to make people correct my articles?
I have written 2 articles, but none help me to rectify them.
My aim is to learn the better expressions through writing.
I expect those who are able to help others would like to motivate us.
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College entrance examination
Today is the first day of Chinese entrance examination each year.
Every family feels quite a bit nervous if only they have a student who will take part in this exam.
It is said in China college entrance examination is the final fair chance in anyone's life.
It not only can change personal future, but can elevate his family's fate. It also was described to be second birth for a student.
In the early morning mother must prepare the rich breakfast for her child. After he eat, mother will escort him to the directed place. Don't consider it to be over, she will stay outside until her kid finishes all his exam.
Policemen need to lock around street and prohibit any cars whistling.
The whole society focus on the exam, even a large number of netizens will discuss together. Because all among them almost took part in it and ever endeavored for it day and night.
Try your best to pursue your dream in mind!
June 7, 2017
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Europe Champion League
Last Saturday I watched the final game of Europe Champion League this year. The two clubs were Real Madrid and Juventus.
One was from Spain and the other was from Italy. The game place was chosen at Millennium Stadium in Cardiff. Bale who is the left forward was born in Cardiff. That was a pity that he was substituted onto the game until it went on 80 minutes.
The competition was so wonderful. At the first 20 minutes Juventus kept on hitting his rival. Real Madrid had to hurry to defend and attack occasionally when they got the ball. But it was unexpected that C.Ronald got the first goal. C.Ronald is one of the most splendid players all over the world.He brought the hope for his fans until Juventus got a goal before half time was finished. As a neutral fan I was happy to meet this consequence because the next half must be more nervous.
Sure enough, in about 2 minutes of second half time Real Madrid attained 2 goals. One of them was also from C.R. That night he was the lightest star and gained the most force from all the fans.
In the end, Real Madrid beat Juventus 4 to 1. They became the defending Champion successfully.
Though my team is not Real Madrid, there is no deny that it is one of the greatest clubs wherever it is in civil or abroad.
June 5, 2017
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about the word "persuade"
Yesterday I watched the film " Frozen". After the elder sister hit her sister's head accidentally, their father carried them to the trolls. The head of trolls told him" The heart is not so easily changed,But the head can be persuaded."
Though I understand what is the troll meaning, I could not locate "persuade" on the dictionary.
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Garlic and his life
When Garlic was young, he has been always dull. He was challenged society. He was not good at catering for others. He became silent and solitary.
Meanwhile, he often made mistakes on his job, so he had to apply for a new job again and again. One day, one of his father's friend introduced a job for him.
Since he entered into the enterprise,he made a decision to learn more and more in order to survive and change himself .
After 2 years, his son was born. Garlic felt he had a friend from now on. His heart got warm.Now he changed a new and bigger house for his family.His wife and son loved him. His life reaches smooth road.
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help me rectify my title,thank you
Last weekend I helped my son check his math. One of question made me sad and has pestered me for several days.
The question: When you go to buy bags, the boss tell you:one bag for 32 dollar, two bags for 55 dollars,three bags for 80 dollars and four bags for 130 dollars. If you want to buy 26 bags , how much can you spend to buy at least ?
It was amazing I failed to search the right calculating process online.
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Help me to modify my article
Last Saturday our family went to theater for The Fast and Furious 8.
I booked 3 seats online in advance. Considering 3D , I choosed the latest row seats. After going out of cinema, my son told me he could not see the words. The movie was showed as the original voice with Chinese words. But I didn't remember he had a bit close sight. Though the activity was so wonderful, he was still not able to get the profile.
He got frustrated with it so that he had a little disappointment. Then I persuaded him we can watch it again on TV later.
We have pursued this series for many years. Because my son likes all sort of luxury cars since he was born. Before he can speak he would be excited and jump while seeing a normal van.
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