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Please correct short sentences! Hi I’m Kasumi. I wrote English sentences because I would like to check grammars in sentences. I featured one word and wrote one sentence. I’m glad if you find any grammar errors and tell me why that is wrong. Distribute: We have to distribute natural resources to all over the world. Indicate: The study indicted that the aging society in Japan had already reached significant line by 2000. Stack: I’m always in trouble when I prepare textbooks because I tend to stack those on my table. Assume: The party resigned in order to assume responsibility on the fault in finance. Revision: The revision version sells less than the previous one. Launch: Mos burger launched a new burger. Implement: You have to organize and implement your plans on university entrance exam. Thank you for finding this post.
February 11, 2019
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Disadvantages of being left-handed *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong :)

I am left-handed by nature and I have some troubles in my daily life.

In Japan generally we are forced to change into right-handed in our childhoods if we are left-handed, because being left-handed is regarded as kind of rude, improper, or inconvenience.

Therefore there are right-handed people in Japan, and the society is necessarily suited to them.

For example, according to one of my favorite novels written by Shigemathu Kiyoshi all of the schools in Japan are installed the black boards in the West because that makes right-handed brighter by lightning them from the South.

Another example is more familiar to us than above. Most stationary, screws and automatic ticket gates are designed for right-handed. Left-handed, such as I, have troubles a little in the daily lives.

I hope that it is easy for left-handed to do anything as right-handed do. I believe that all societies should be tender to minorities.

March 4, 2018
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Why does it have a limitation on "not to do"? I have no idea! Please help me;(

○ I got up early today so that I would not be late for the meeting.

× I got up early today not to be late for the meeting.

Recently I learned that you should not use "not to do" when you want to say such an example, because it is not general to use "not to do" in such the sentence.

I think that both "~ so that I would not be..." and "~ not to be..." can be the same representation. Please tell me what differences there are.

February 21, 2018
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Is it important to know the detail of historical events today? *Thank you for opening this page!

I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

It is important to know the details of historical events today because to know histries I have never known is beneficial to you.

First, you will acquire many knowledge through the sightseeing, if you know some historical events when you travel abroad. You can enjoy your trip when you see the historical tracks with the eyes which only learned in books. By encouraging any inspirations, your trip will be better than without any inspirations.

Second, to know the details of histrical events will broaden your horizons. You will understand every day news on TV or in newspapers if you have any knowledge about historical events. Therefore to know histrical events enable you to understand other countries deeply.

Considering those reasons, it is important to know the details of histrical events.

February 18, 2018
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What I hope to gain from my time at university *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I would like to gain something important by learning English from my time at university, because learning English enables me to know a new view of the world.

First, I hope to be able to speak English. At my senior high school, there were no opportunities to interact with English speakers so that I only studied writing English. Thus, I will gain a lot of opportunities to speak English with English speakers.

Second, I hope to get good relationships with others around me. I will be able to make friends with who those learn with me at university. Plus, I can make friends with a lot of foreigners if I study around. I would like to gain lasting friendships from my time at university.

Considering those reasons, I should make a lot of my time to learn English at university.

*Thank you so much to watch my essay!

February 16, 2018
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I described an experience I had with beauty. *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I am going to describe my experience about illustrations.

I like painting illustrations with my iPad because there are a lot of fascinations in digital illustrations.

Of course, there are various good points between paintings written with digital tools and paintings written with a paper and inks. However, paintings written with digital tools enable me to paint illustrations more fabulous than written with a paper and inks. For example, I can make my illustrations lightened and more vicid with my iPad.

In addition, even if I make a mistake, I can erase the wrong point immediately. Using such a way, I have won a prize in a illustration contest. I was so happy that I would keep my mind this.

Those are my experience with beauty.

February 14, 2018
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Should it be held Olympics? *IT IS MERELY AN ASSUMPTION TO PRACTICE WRITING. *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I believe one of Japanese cities should invite Olympics because it would profit for us.

Of course, it cost too much for all of Japanese people to invite Olympics in Japan so maybe there would be a lot of criticizes against inviting. However, the more foreigners come to Japan, the more prosperity Japan could develop. For example, as it is seen to Chinese, those who come to Japan to go to Olympics would buy Japanese products, what we call "Bakugai." On the contrary, if Japanese corporations concerned with Olympics sell Olympic productions something cute, cheap or delicious, Japan would get more profits than cost to prepare for the Olympics.

In conclusion, holding Okympics in Japan would be good for us.

February 13, 2018
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Is it important for young people to play sports? *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I believe it is important for young people to play sports, because playing sports are good in many regards.

First, we can stay healthy by playing any sports. Getting exercise is good for our body and mind. When we exercise, we can forget something bad and fet fresh feelings, and get some muscles and lose weight. Even though we get old, as long as we have muscles enough to take care of ourselves, we will keep our minds as if we were young.

Second, sports particularly any team sports enables us to learn importance of getting through any difficulties with our teammates. The more we practice with each other, the stronger bonds we have.

Because of those reasons, I believe we young people should play sports.

February 12, 2018
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Would you like to live by yourself when you work? *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me where I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I would like to live by myself when I work, because I would be able to be independent of my family.

Of course, living by family would make me easier than living by myself because there are my family who helps me. However, even if I live with my family regardless of being an adult, I could not able to do anything such as cooking or making my living. If I get married someone, my husband would be surprised at me because I would not know ways to live alone. Moreover my husband would desert me.

Because of those reasons, it is necessary for me to live by myself when I work.

February 10, 2018
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Is space research worthwhile in spite of extremely expensive? *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me where I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I do not think that space research is worthwhile because we should spend such money using for the earth, and it would be bad for the environment.

Some people may say that space research is worthwhile because it may be useful for us in the future; if we find a new place in which we can live in the space, we could live there like the earth. However, we shoud search for not space but the earth. For example, if we spend such money cleaning water, planting trees or building something living for poor people, our living would be happier than ever before.

On the contrary, space research is bad for the environment. When rockets lounch for space, a lot of gas will be emitted. Even if we succeed in launching rockets, it may become the space-trash.

Because of those reasons, I do not think it is worthwhile.

February 8, 2018
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