I don't know it right or not,wish someone can help me,please 1.Академия современного искусства в провинции Хэйлунцзян Создание Hengdaohe центра 2.Хэйлунцзян провинция комиксов Библиотека 3.Туризм в провинции Хэйлунцзян Арт центр для исследования инноваций и развития 4.Дракон культуры и искусств Центр обмена Хэйлунцзян провинция

Are there mistakes in these sentence? The presence of early marriage among local women is influenced by the traditional concept of history, as well as the objective factors of modern complex social environment. Women's early marriage in the region still present a rising trend in recent years.And in the process of modernization, early marriage is not conducive to the healthy physical and mental development of early marriage men and women, also does not conform to China's legal regulations in "marriage law",to build a new socialist countryside is a challenge. Therefore, in the 21st century, it is necessary to analyze the causes of women's early marriage and to solve the problem of women's early marriage.

The analyze of early marriage The presence of early marriage among local women is influenced by the traditional concept of history, as well as the objective factors of modern complex social environment. Women's early marriage in the region still present a rising trend in recent years.And in the process of modernization, early marriage is not conducive to the healthy physical and mental development of early marriage men and women, also does not conform to China's legal regulations in "marriage law",to build a new socialist countryside is a challenge. Therefore, in the 21st century, it is necessary to analyze the causes of women's early marriage and to solve the problem of women's early marriage.

My problems of English I have learn English so many years,but also can't speaking very well.And my grammar is too bad,I don't know how to make it better.The reason of these questions,maybe I don't have so many language environment,I can't practice it every time.But I think I will make my English better through exercise of everyday.