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IELTS task2 practice! /*this is my practice of IELTS writing task 2. If you could correct me or give me advise it would be a great help for me.*/ Write about the following topic: Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? Answer: It is said that researchers that the natural characteristics affect on us more than the experiences we had been through. In my point of view, I believe that the incident happened in our life may have more impact on us. First of all, it is true that everything occurring in our life has more or less influence on us after we are born. The moment we came on Earth is when we started to receive information. It is also a lot of researchers who had pointed that the environment plays a big role of forming our personalities. For example, there is a ancient Chinese story that a mother switched the place three times so as to find a great environment for her child to study. In the end of the story, they lived nearby a school which her child could learn even better than other location they had stayed. On the other hand, I think the most of characteristics we have naturally couldn't have a deeper influence on our mind. If somebody having a beautiful face and fit body may have more confident trait, but when he or she is getting old ,the confidence of a person may disappear. It is because this personality doesn't forming from inside. For instance, a low self-esteem disable person may find the value if himself and became more happy and confident by working harder or accomplishing a big task. In brief, I think the most trait of a person depending on important things of his life rather than the nature.
February 19, 2017
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The information of the main underground railway systems in the world (IELTS task 1practice) /*this is my task 1practice! Hope you guys could give me some advise, thanks for that. */ The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. This graph shows the information of the underground railway systems around the world including the opening date, kilometer of route, and the number of passengers per year. As we can see, London railway system has the oldest system and longest route. In terms of the amount of passengers, Tokyo has the top one system. Looking at more closely, the railway system in London opened in 1863 whose route is 394 km with 775 million people per year. While there is the second oldest railway system in Paris with 199 km route and 1191 million passengers, Tokyo railway system opened in 1927 and there are more than 1900 million passengers per year with 155 km route. On the other hand, Washington DC railway system opened in 1976 whose route is 120 km with 144 million passengers per year. It is Kyoto railway system that has the shortest route(11 km) and the fewest passengers (45 million). Finally, the railway system in Los Angeles is the newest one with 28 km route and 60 million passengers per year.
February 19, 2017
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IELTS task 1practice! Hi everyone ,I'm Marshall. I'm preparing for the test. Hoping everybody could give me advises about how to improve my ability. It would be a great help if you could correct me or suggest my article. Thanks. /*The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*/ There are two charts. One of which shows that students study for career or for interest by different age groups, and the other shows that by separate age group how many of them receive the support. Let's look at the first chart in detail. We could know that when the age of groups increase ,the percentage of studying for career gradually decline. In contrast, the percentage of studying for interest also raise with the age increasing. On the other chart, we could see that over 50% of people who are under 30 are supported by employers. The group between 30 to 39 reaches the lowest point, but the percentage increases after this interval. In conclusion, the people under 40 are more willing to study for career. Also the trend is similar to the percentage of the support by employers. When the age is beyond 40, the tendency of two charts are similar.
February 8, 2017
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IELTS practice! /*Write about the following topic: University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? */ Answer: I do agree that university should accept the same number of male or female student in every subject. University should not specifically accept more girls or boys for whatever purpose. Of course,university must have no bias on male or female .They judge students by their GPA, expertise, sport performance, or characteristics. They should concern that whether abilities of the student fulfill the subject . But what if there are more female/male students want to go to some subjects? What if the bias and the sexist have already existed in society? People grow up with those perception which affect us on our choices. There are more female nurses than male ones.There are more male police officers than female ones. People could see this phenomenon at a lot of work. These factors would make affect us on decisions including which subject we choose.So, if there are more male student want to major in some subject ,university would naturally accept more male student. No matter university means it or not. But it doesn't mean university has bias. So this is not a question about how should university be fair or what is my opinion about how university may have prejudges. The point is how we jump off the stereotype in society to find what we really want to be. The first step is that education system should portray the idea about equality or looking for our own interests before we choosing the subject or work in the future. People should not be judged only by appearance or gender.
January 24, 2017
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The IELTS writing patce /*Academic Writing Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*/ Answer: Obviously,the chart shows that the trends of proportion in USA and Sweden are similar .They both basically keep growing from 1940 to 2040 .There is still a difference between 1980 to 2020 .In USA,the proportion keeps stable at about 15% and incline after that time. In contrast to USA,the proportion in Sweden has more changes .It goes high from 15 to 20 around 2000 and then decline . On the other side,the proportion in Japan is more different from the previous two .Before about 2030,the trend of proportion looks like a up-ward curve .The proportion never goes over 10%.But starting from 2030 ,the line of proportion goes so high ,which is even over the other two counties . In my opinion,I think It shows that the most of the advanced countries in the world will follow the trend in this chart in the future .Since these three countries present the three mature figure of Asian, Europe and ,American .They will also need to solve the aged problem in a few years .
January 24, 2017
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