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Guys, please help me with my introduction. I need to improve it somehow.
My name is Yury and I come from Saint-Petersburg, Russia – the biggest country in the world. I graduated from a Russian private school in Saint-Petersburg , which is called “Peterburgskiy Standard”. After graduation I have been living in China for 2 years, which allowed me to gain knowledge of the culture of the country and language. Restaurant industry has always attracted me, and the faculty of Hospitality management is an opportunity for me to obtain enough knowledge and experience about how that business works. In the future, I want to own a restaurant that will be placed in the Netherlands or somewhere in Europe. Thus, I will be able to transfer all my creativity and knowledge that I will receive at the end of my studies in Wittenborg University.
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This module was structured extremely pleasant; at the base of each lecture were examples of the teacher's life that, in turn, created the atmosphere in the classroom highly relaxed and friendly. In general, the lessons were held as a type of dialogue of students with the teacher. The attitude of the teacher towards using various devises during the lesson was absolutely approved and even complimented. I tried to attend all the lessons in this course, however due to problems related to health - I was not able to attend all the classes. As a result, I did not pass the exam.
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This subject turned out to be a disappointment. From the first lecture I was demotivated for several reasons. Firstly, I was expecting a completely different knowledge from this subject. Also, it is worth noting that, in my view "intercultural" management should include a variety of the areas together and should not be overly abstract. Secondly, the teacher often was using academic terminology, which in turn evoked some antipathy to the subject. Moreover, in general, a method of teaching was very boring and monotonous, which caused only a great dislike. In this regard, I missed a lot of lectures, which influenced the results of the exam and caused demotivation in the future. I did not pass the exam and this was very much reflected in the subsequent study blocks.
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My name is Yury and I came from Saint-Petersburg, Russia – the biggest country in the world. I graduated high school from a Russian private school in Saint-Petersburg “Peterburgskiy Standard”. After graduation, I have been living in China for 2 years, which allowed me to gain knowledge about the culture of the country and the language. Restaurant business has always attracted me, and the faculty of Hospitality management is an opportunity for me to obtain enough knowledge and experience about how that business works. In the future, I want to own a restaurant that will be placed in the Netherlands or somewhere in Europe. Thus, I will be able to transfer all my creativity and the knowledge that I will receive at the end of my studies in Wittenborg University.
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